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10/21/2012 c1 Nicholia
I wasn't expecting a poem but it was perfect and beautiful! MORE!
10/19/2012 c1 ShoelessKayla
Wow this is great (Like Frosted Flakes)! Poor Danny he's got such a big heart, and Neville knew he could use that to his advantage. Anyway, great poem! Favorited!
10/19/2012 c1 3L o l i t a d e l i r i u m
I love the last lines "You are important, kid, / more than you know" *grin* The rhythm well very well done and structured.
Alas, we do need more Danny and Neville fanfictions. ;)
10/16/2012 c1 44mari6s
Great rhythm and insight into that scene. Good job!
10/16/2012 c1 1SupernaturalFlames
Nice poem! It describes the scene perfectly. :) Great job!
10/15/2012 c1 331983Sarah
Bravo! I love this show and you did a wonderful job with the boy's (Danny) internal struggle to do what is right vs. what will help him the most.
10/14/2012 c1 153IronAmerica
Nice! This is beautiful!

Poor, poor, conflicted Danny. He's such a sweetie, but really not ruthless to survive in the world he's in. This was beautiful and lovely to read. Wish I could write poetry. Or even freeverse. Best I can do is a few dirty limmericks...

Loved this. I would find something to quibble about, but I'm smiling too much.

-IA

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