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10/29/2019 c1 Ushindeshi
Great song.
11/4/2014 c1 56ForeverDreamer12
*sniffs* That was absolutely beautiful... I could really feel the emotion...

My only critique is that when different people are talking, seperate it into different paragraphs. For example:

"Lucy," Natsu said. "Yes?" she replies.

Is harder to read then:

"Lucy," Natsu said.

"Yes?" she replies.

Not only is it easier to distinguish who's talking, it's easier to read :)

Ever :D
1/4/2014 c1 lilobsessive
Loved it!
7/13/2013 c1 14Pikaskye
aw cute. *had died of fluffiness* i like the lyrics of the song it fit VERY well with the story. 3
10/22/2012 c1 14Lucy Ashley from Fairy Tail
I love it!
10/16/2012 c1 4NalUlove4ever
cute!
10/16/2012 c1 3GoldenRoseTanya
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww

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