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11/12/2012 c6 Guest
I was so excited when I saw another chapter was posted! Keep up the great work.
11/12/2012 c6 Guest
Hi*giggles stupidly* I love this story so fricken much! Please update!
11/11/2012 c5 laterbros
Wow good chapter please continue
10/28/2012 c3 inactive-deleted account2
Hi, your story is very interesting (in a good way). Just when you write dialogue, when a new character is speaking you create a new paragraph. It makes the story easier to understand and not as jumbled together. Like this:
"You are not teaching her how to fight," insisted Logan.
"But if something goes wrong I want to know how to defend myself," Ari argued back.
I don't know hope that helps you with your writing. You've got a really good idea, keep writing it.
10/27/2012 c3 WB1J
I love this story! Please update soon!
10/17/2012 c1 Btrfan94
This really good. I can't wait to read more!

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