for Heir of the Rabbit Goddess4/10 c10 Stewie
I really hope this continues.
I really hope this continues.
2/23 c10 Guest
Overall story is fascinating. It would be one hell of a plot twist to suddenly have Naruto turn on anyone the moment Kaguya is revived. Especially since said revival requires his sister's death and/or chakra. Its a pity this will likely never continue. Good work though!
Overall story is fascinating. It would be one hell of a plot twist to suddenly have Naruto turn on anyone the moment Kaguya is revived. Especially since said revival requires his sister's death and/or chakra. Its a pity this will likely never continue. Good work though!
1/14 c10 Cthul
Wow, one of your stories that does have atrocious grammar… colour me surprised. A bit nonsensical though, promising from a plot perspective but nothing else.
Wow, one of your stories that does have atrocious grammar… colour me surprised. A bit nonsensical though, promising from a plot perspective but nothing else.
10/30/2024 c10 Guest
Need more
Need more
9/30/2024 c10 Guest
Please chapter 11 can you include the kumenju
Please chapter 11 can you include the kumenju
8/8/2024 c10 GamerBlood
Me encantaria que la continuaras, es hermosa, en especial la ultima frase de Zetsu Negro
Me encantaria que la continuaras, es hermosa, en especial la ultima frase de Zetsu Negro
7/21/2024 c8 Guest
Naruto's personality sucks in this one. you don't really feel bad for him because he was only attacked by one thing and then he turned into an emo. Everybody's jumping over themselves trying to kiss his ass and he just says no for like no real reason
Naruto's personality sucks in this one. you don't really feel bad for him because he was only attacked by one thing and then he turned into an emo. Everybody's jumping over themselves trying to kiss his ass and he just says no for like no real reason
5/12/2024 c10 Guest
So is Naruto a villain here? Outsmarting fake Madara is commendable
So is Naruto a villain here? Outsmarting fake Madara is commendable
1/12/2024 c10 loaphantasma
Damn, this is great. A very original naruto neglect fic. Not even mentioning Kaguya (who's great btw). I would very much like to see continuation
Damn, this is great. A very original naruto neglect fic. Not even mentioning Kaguya (who's great btw). I would very much like to see continuation
6/24/2023 c10 
2Life is not fair
Man i hope hea gonna come back and update this story its well written some grammer problems but not to much and the plot is over all very good
2Life is not fairMan i hope hea gonna come back and update this story its well written some grammer problems but not to much and the plot is over all very good