
11/25/2023 c179 aileen94
Hi,
I just spend the last days to read your story and I really like it. It was nice and easy to read.
The way that you describe the characters and the action is really good and I also like the way you describes the thoughts of Kari and the Doctor.
I also like the unique adventures which are not taken from the show.
Are you planning on continuing the story?
if yes, then I really look forward to the next chapters
Best regards,
aileen94
Hi,
I just spend the last days to read your story and I really like it. It was nice and easy to read.
The way that you describe the characters and the action is really good and I also like the way you describes the thoughts of Kari and the Doctor.
I also like the unique adventures which are not taken from the show.
Are you planning on continuing the story?
if yes, then I really look forward to the next chapters
Best regards,
aileen94
10/25/2023 c16 turtleduck king
Another Mary Sue, ha? She takes the Doctor's lines, his actions and looks so perfect. And it’s not difficult for her to cope with Cassandra, to communicate telepathically with the Doctor and Jack, and she doesn’t even get tired! Of course, a fully trained Time Lord of who knows what age cannot do anything, but for a little girl everything is easy and simple, yes, I can believe it. (No). And again she’s with her spoilers and keeping secrets from the Doctor, but when they didn’t tell her something, it’s fucked up, how can this be, I’ll go and throw a tantrum. And about the fact that the Doctor didn’t understand where Cassandra was and where Kari was... If I hadn’t paid attention to who was talking, I wouldn’t have known either. There were no strong differences, no specific “line in the sand”. I love this story, but I'm afraid if this continues I'll stop reading. I'm sorry. Have a good day
Another Mary Sue, ha? She takes the Doctor's lines, his actions and looks so perfect. And it’s not difficult for her to cope with Cassandra, to communicate telepathically with the Doctor and Jack, and she doesn’t even get tired! Of course, a fully trained Time Lord of who knows what age cannot do anything, but for a little girl everything is easy and simple, yes, I can believe it. (No). And again she’s with her spoilers and keeping secrets from the Doctor, but when they didn’t tell her something, it’s fucked up, how can this be, I’ll go and throw a tantrum. And about the fact that the Doctor didn’t understand where Cassandra was and where Kari was... If I hadn’t paid attention to who was talking, I wouldn’t have known either. There were no strong differences, no specific “line in the sand”. I love this story, but I'm afraid if this continues I'll stop reading. I'm sorry. Have a good day
10/25/2023 c15 turtleduck king
Seriously, breaks? This sound is not due to the breaks and the Doctor's "bad driving", seriously, so you think none of the Time Lords can drive a TARDIS? Because the only time it didn't sound was from the river in the time of angels and, surprise, we later find out that there is a silent mode. Besides, will she ever understand that what happened was not entirely the Doctor's fault or are you making her into another river with the Doctor-lapdog?
Seriously, breaks? This sound is not due to the breaks and the Doctor's "bad driving", seriously, so you think none of the Time Lords can drive a TARDIS? Because the only time it didn't sound was from the river in the time of angels and, surprise, we later find out that there is a silent mode. Besides, will she ever understand that what happened was not entirely the Doctor's fault or are you making her into another river with the Doctor-lapdog?
10/25/2023 c14 turtleduck king
Honestly, I'm on the Doctor's side on this one. I mean, watching your lover/girlfriend/wife/whoever she is now flirting with some scumbag who seems to be getting better (he was a scumbag in the first series) is hard enough, isn't it? here she also lashes out at him for no reason... And when he asks a completely fair question how saving Jack will affect the timeline, Kari, without explaining, says that he is so terrible, everywhere is better than with him, why am I not on Earth. And she is offended that he leaves her on Earth. Isn't that what she wanted? I understand the frustration of not knowing, especially about such important things. But hypocrisy? Doesn't she say spoilers every time and laugh when the Doctor gets annoyed? Did she tell him about River, whom she considered his wife? Not to mention that Kari has all the puzzle pieces in her hands, putting them together shouldn't be that hard. Talk to the Doctor about ityes; but putting the picture together? So, I really shouldn’t see her, charges of minor or moderate bodily harm will not look very good on a lawyer’s resumeHave a nice day)
Honestly, I'm on the Doctor's side on this one. I mean, watching your lover/girlfriend/wife/whoever she is now flirting with some scumbag who seems to be getting better (he was a scumbag in the first series) is hard enough, isn't it? here she also lashes out at him for no reason... And when he asks a completely fair question how saving Jack will affect the timeline, Kari, without explaining, says that he is so terrible, everywhere is better than with him, why am I not on Earth. And she is offended that he leaves her on Earth. Isn't that what she wanted? I understand the frustration of not knowing, especially about such important things. But hypocrisy? Doesn't she say spoilers every time and laugh when the Doctor gets annoyed? Did she tell him about River, whom she considered his wife? Not to mention that Kari has all the puzzle pieces in her hands, putting them together shouldn't be that hard. Talk to the Doctor about ityes; but putting the picture together? So, I really shouldn’t see her, charges of minor or moderate bodily harm will not look very good on a lawyer’s resumeHave a nice day)
9/20/2023 c179
7Slayer76
Okay, a little disappointed that this wasn’t a regeneration, but that epic power clash totally makes up for it. She became an anime character for a minute and now I can’t stop laughing.

Okay, a little disappointed that this wasn’t a regeneration, but that epic power clash totally makes up for it. She became an anime character for a minute and now I can’t stop laughing.
9/20/2023 c179 biancarhodes53
This episode always makes me cry.
I kinda forget how poweful Kari is, it’s always cool to see her use it.
This episode always makes me cry.
I kinda forget how poweful Kari is, it’s always cool to see her use it.
9/19/2023 c178 Slayer76
Finally caught up and now I’m stuck waiting for chapters like the rest. Great story, and I feel like if Kari is ever going to regenerate now would be where it happens. I’m pretty sure this is the most vulnerable she’s ever been during a big event, so far in her perspective.
Finally caught up and now I’m stuck waiting for chapters like the rest. Great story, and I feel like if Kari is ever going to regenerate now would be where it happens. I’m pretty sure this is the most vulnerable she’s ever been during a big event, so far in her perspective.