
11/8/2020 c1 Marianka
I am not Bella and Emmet Fan !
But i am so supriced how much i like this !
You wrote this so lovly and with a lot of Emotion -
You did a exellent Job !
You can not make one pretty .Bella was before Alice Make Over pretty and beatyfull.
Sad she dont see herself so clear and beatyfull !
I dont know this Song but sounds very great !
I am not Bella and Emmet Fan !
But i am so supriced how much i like this !
You wrote this so lovly and with a lot of Emotion -
You did a exellent Job !
You can not make one pretty .Bella was before Alice Make Over pretty and beatyfull.
Sad she dont see herself so clear and beatyfull !
I dont know this Song but sounds very great !
10/20/2019 c1
8Lalaland972
I love when songs bring inspiration for writing. Cute story! Thanks for sharing.

I love when songs bring inspiration for writing. Cute story! Thanks for sharing.
9/7/2019 c1 silky jacob
its really a wonderful oneshot.
happy they finally got together and are so in love.
its really a wonderful oneshot.
happy they finally got together and are so in love.
4/30/2018 c1
38Lovely Black Butterfly
I am a total EmxBella pairing fan. Please write more. I love this little one shot. I absolutely love that song. It always brings tears to my eyes

I am a total EmxBella pairing fan. Please write more. I love this little one shot. I absolutely love that song. It always brings tears to my eyes
12/26/2017 c1
97Theadosia57
This was nice, a gentle coming of age romance and I like Emmett,
I don't write him often due to the amount of humour involved for him.
But it was lovely all the same xx
Alexis

This was nice, a gentle coming of age romance and I like Emmett,
I don't write him often due to the amount of humour involved for him.
But it was lovely all the same xx
Alexis
6/20/2017 c1 Guest
Mmm no
Mmm no
1/26/2017 c1 Devora13
Bella and Emmet are not my favourite pair in a romantic way but you did pretty good. The idea was great!
The only bad thing is the flow of the story, sentences are too short, very repetitive. Needs proofreading.
Bella and Emmet are not my favourite pair in a romantic way but you did pretty good. The idea was great!
The only bad thing is the flow of the story, sentences are too short, very repetitive. Needs proofreading.