for A new kind of feeling10/26/2012 c1 Guest
i reall like this story but umm the last part didnt make since i mean he let her eat him out but she would never want a monster to touch her i mean why come on to her if you dont want to touch him
i reall like this story but umm the last part didnt make since i mean he let her eat him out but she would never want a monster to touch her i mean why come on to her if you dont want to touch him
10/21/2012 c1 
6Lady Blackhat
I read you bio and I cannot help but give my honest opinion about your story. I like the general concept. Kane being dominated by AJ, then have her reject him at the end is a very interesting thought. However, I would encourage you to spell check your work at least. I think the story would flow much more smoothly if grammar and spelling techniques were applied.
6Lady BlackhatI read you bio and I cannot help but give my honest opinion about your story. I like the general concept. Kane being dominated by AJ, then have her reject him at the end is a very interesting thought. However, I would encourage you to spell check your work at least. I think the story would flow much more smoothly if grammar and spelling techniques were applied.