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7/10/2016 c14 1Kocainum
What a great ending. Lol at that Ironic chapter name though.

Not that I hadn't hoped for her to grow/evolve female parts all along, but now that this is finally the case, I assume she would kinda have to wear some form of attire if the story were continued... That would be interesting. And not in a negative way.

Ah, well... Overall, really well done, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Glad it ended on a loose cut chapter, makes it much more bearable. I wish this got enough reviews to be worth continuing... It's so hard to find quality writers who can properly balance a slice of life, drama, rom/com like this. That so few people appreciate it makes no sense to me. I'll follow this just in case though...
7/10/2016 c13 Kocainum
Powerful chapter and wow, bad guess lolll... but it i figure it was obvious not to have been rika. Since lexia should still have been awake at the time, before daniel would have fallen asleep.

Pretty cool how he's got that capability when he needs it. Seems fair.

I'm grateful the arch ended quickly enough so not to be cut off after the next chapter though. That would have tore me up pretty bad, so... :)
7/10/2016 c12 Kocainum
Yes. I'm an idiot, before you say anything(eh, it's too late).
10 years to rika and takato, not for daniel... damn, not good to attempt to process things when your tired. This story has me marathoning the thing.

Anyways... I guessing rika has had a mind fracture and gone loopy enough to wanna kill daniel... and damn it, its getting so good, but only two chapters till its a forever bottomless cliff. :(

Great chapter though!
7/10/2016 c11 Kocainum
Woah, 10 year timey wimey skippidy doo-da. Kinda feel empty having missed the biobonding thingy... still great chapter none the less.
7/10/2016 c10 Kocainum
Yeah, somehow I imagine the other players will end up ruining any semblance of a comfy life in town... Nothing good can come from them all staring with jealousy or curious envy.
7/10/2016 c9 Kocainum
Cool, I was kinda wondering when the others would show up...
Too bad Daniel and them lost the beach house, sounded like the perfect retirement spot.
Great chapter.
7/10/2016 c8 Kocainum
Totally happyness chapter! I laughed my ass off when he got guilmon high and he was hysterical, man that was great... Renamon walks in like,
'wth is going on..'
"oh, Hey babe!"
'Don't "Hey babe" me!'

Gold. You a pro!
7/10/2016 c7 Kocainum
Wow I hadn't expect them to find her friend still alive somehow... Hope he doesn't end up causing daniel any issues. I can see him becoming jealous somehow over him being with her.

Neat chapter
7/10/2016 c6 Kocainum
Very classy. I'm glad no time skips have happened yet...
7/10/2016 c5 Kocainum
Cuteness for days...
Loved every second.
7/10/2016 c4 Kocainum
This flows so beautifully. How did I end up waiting so long to find this. It deserves at least thrice as many reviews! Just an astounding level of detail put in. And the fact that it's based from actually experiences makes it all the more impressive.
7/9/2016 c3 Kocainum
Your a master.
How many walls of immersive depth are you going to break before this becomes a prime time reality tv show. Sure wish I could write like this... It's like my perfect aspiration for technique and design.
Too bad it's not longer or still in progress. I'm afraid to reach the end, being unfinished...
7/9/2016 c2 Kocainum
It is not often I can find such an immersive story that is exactly what I had been searching for. I am so thankful!
7/9/2016 c1 Kocainum
MAN, this is such quality polish! Everything. What a joy to read such a great story idea and clean writing technique!

Thank you sir!
3/1/2016 c14 ShadowEonEclipseChaos
One looks forward to seeing were this is heaed.
More PLEASE!
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