for A Better Life1/22/2017 c8 AdorableSkitty639
Heyo! I was just wondering if you could update with where you left off next. Please consider!
Heyo! I was just wondering if you could update with where you left off next. Please consider!
1/4/2016 c8 Guest
Please continue! It's very interesting!
Please continue! It's very interesting!
11/4/2014 c8 Opal Turquoise
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE ITS SO AWESOME! *tries to fave over and over and over and over and over and over*
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE ITS SO AWESOME! *tries to fave over and over and over and over and over and over*
3/31/2014 c8 peachy.st
Why are the girls younger then the boys and why are the girls training the boys when the girls are younger?
Why are the girls younger then the boys and why are the girls training the boys when the girls are younger?
12/3/2013 c8 dragonlver
this is amazing
you had better update soon or I will go crazy ;)
you are an amazing author
this is amazing
you had better update soon or I will go crazy ;)
you are an amazing author
10/17/2013 c8 Guest
Please continue it's really good and I really want to know what happens
Please continue it's really good and I really want to know what happens
9/22/2013 c7 mystery101
cant wait 4 next chappie
cant wait 4 next chappie
6/3/2013 c7 OblivionIsOnlyInevitable
Aww I really wanted to see who one in their spars!. awwwwhhh well. Next time!;))
Aww I really wanted to see who one in their spars!. awwwwhhh well. Next time!;))
6/3/2013 c6 OblivionIsOnlyInevitable
Awww man, I'm still bummed that dawn and misty lost.:( oh well, at least leaf and yellow won!:D u know, I'm kinda hoping may loses. She just looks like she always wins, like misty, and drew just doesn't, so it would be funny if she lost, just becuz I could picture her reaction!xD
Awww man, I'm still bummed that dawn and misty lost.:( oh well, at least leaf and yellow won!:D u know, I'm kinda hoping may loses. She just looks like she always wins, like misty, and drew just doesn't, so it would be funny if she lost, just becuz I could picture her reaction!xD
6/3/2013 c5 OblivionIsOnlyInevitable
Wait I'm kinda confuse...who r the couples again?:)) or is that a secret?;D
Wait I'm kinda confuse...who r the couples again?:)) or is that a secret?;D
6/3/2013 c3 OblivionIsOnlyInevitable
That was crazy!:D I wonder who the mystery man is lol though I could take a guess, and probably anticipate exactly who it is, but that would ruin the whole fun of seeing who it is!x))
That was crazy!:D I wonder who the mystery man is lol though I could take a guess, and probably anticipate exactly who it is, but that would ruin the whole fun of seeing who it is!x))
6/3/2013 c2 OblivionIsOnlyInevitable
Aw man!xD I've been looking for a story like this, and let me tell u, I love the way u made misty's life, and hope her skills r really good lol
Aw man!xD I've been looking for a story like this, and let me tell u, I love the way u made misty's life, and hope her skills r really good lol
44/30/2013 c6 Guest
This is totally awesome please update!
This is totally awesome please update!