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11/16/2017 c1 sanbeegoldiewhitey
Bad start.
4/2/2015 c5 an
yeah i think he should keep the baby :) and also the names could be, if a boy, al like is brother, because you can't not see his so strong bound with is brother, and also if it would be a girl the name could be Trisha or Lucy or just something that is significal to them
8/20/2013 c5 Jackellynekolove
Ed keeps the baby. its a girl an is named Aurora *-*
2/10/2013 c5 meganeko
i think edward should have the baby (BTW i think it would be sweet if they named the baby after maes hughes)
12/9/2012 c5 Guest
Of course Ed is keeping the baby, if he doesn't this fic will be very short and the name contest will be moot.

On that point, I would think Ed would want to use Tricia or Nina for a girl, and Maes or Alphonse for a boy. But Roy might want some input too. I'm sure he'd be in perfect agreement with Maes and wouldn't object to Tricia or Alphonse, but would probably not be thrilled to name a child after a little girl whose murder investigation he had to warn Ed off of. He might prefer Chris, after his foster mother.
12/9/2012 c5 end28
What? But Ed didn't want the baby died in the first chp. So why ask that now? Man...

This is a hard decision...
12/9/2012 c4 end28
Wow...nice stand Mustang...jerk-head.

But I love the ending. Nice job.
11/20/2012 c3 1DocDIS
You going to continue? Please tell me you will!
11/13/2012 c3 Guest
dun dun DUNNNN! You still need to watch your tenses.
11/12/2012 c3 end28
Oh my gosh. A CLIFFHANGER! I wanted to see Roy's reaction when he finds out about Ed's pregnancy. WAWAWA! :'(

Oh well, wait till next time. Good luck with the next chp.
10/30/2012 c2 end28
Man that was short. Oh well. Nice job. Keep it up. I can't wait to see Roy's reaction when Ed or Dr. Knox tells him the news.

Good luck
10/26/2012 c1 end28
Oh my Gosh! ED has a womanhood and his manhood is replaced...oh my gosh. Stupid Gate...

But having Roy's child that was a surprise. I'm with Hawkeye on this one. If Roy does hurt him, I"m going to burn his ass!

Anyways, I can't to read what happen next! Please continue:D
10/23/2012 c1 Guest
Nice transition, the tone is not too different so you don't feel like you're suddenly in a completely different story. Watch the tenses though.

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