
11/1/2012 c3
5CVLTheDragonSlayer
*gasps* I knew all along it was PB! Ice King had kidnapped her so many times!

*gasps* I knew all along it was PB! Ice King had kidnapped her so many times!
11/1/2012 c3 Anon
Cool new chapter, I hope is really Betty tho
Cool new chapter, I hope is really Betty tho
11/1/2012 c3
1The Fluffy Ball
Yay, you updated! Quickly, too. I'm liking this. :D
Ooh, plot advancement. This should be good.
I'm slightly bugged that they're playing Card Wars. Not a biggie, but I always imagined that Finn would stay well away from that game after... the incident. (At least that's how I am with my mom's boy toy and his board games. Never again.) It did, however, provide a reason for FP to be there and answer the door, which is great, and a good use of something mentioned in the show.

Yay, you updated! Quickly, too. I'm liking this. :D
Ooh, plot advancement. This should be good.
I'm slightly bugged that they're playing Card Wars. Not a biggie, but I always imagined that Finn would stay well away from that game after... the incident. (At least that's how I am with my mom's boy toy and his board games. Never again.) It did, however, provide a reason for FP to be there and answer the door, which is great, and a good use of something mentioned in the show.
11/1/2012 c2 Hoboking
awesomeness. Cant wait till next chapter
awesomeness. Cant wait till next chapter
10/31/2012 c1 CVLTheDragonSlayer
1. Flame Princess should become Stormo's future mother. IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN...
2. I love this!
1. Flame Princess should become Stormo's future mother. IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN...
2. I love this!
10/31/2012 c2
1The Fluffy Ball
Oooh, now we're getting somewhere. I can't wait until Simon sees Finn and Jake. Will he remember them? Will he thank them? How will they react?
It's awesome that you've updated so quickly, as well.

Oooh, now we're getting somewhere. I can't wait until Simon sees Finn and Jake. Will he remember them? Will he thank them? How will they react?
It's awesome that you've updated so quickly, as well.
10/30/2012 c1 mattdell201234
great story so is this going to be an ice king Betty / Dr. Princess story?
great story so is this going to be an ice king Betty / Dr. Princess story?