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5/30/2023 c1 Guest
The premise behind the story is good and engaging. Unfortunately, the spelling and punctuation make it difficult to read. If you’re still writing (and I hope you are, because you have great ideas), you might want to consider a beta reader. Spell check won’t necessarily catch all mistakes (especially if a wrong word was used instead of a misspelled word).
Some of the repeat offenders were:
Definitely (as opposed to defiantly or definently)
Even (As opposed to Evan)
Supposed to (as opposed to suppose to)
Accept your fate (not except your fate)
11/14/2021 c15 KateLynYT2002
Absolutely loved this! Please do a sequel to this when you can!
2/25/2021 c4 Midnight
OMG
This is soo good .
WOW the languege you used , Farsi , is my mother languege , if I get the point right
9/6/2019 c15 382JanetM74
Good premise, nicely done.
4/13/2019 c2 Guest
The writing and dialogue is to formal for the fandom and characters.
3/11/2019 c2 48Pink ranger 13
It’s a great story!
5/12/2016 c1 1MidnightForest037
I love all ur stories, and I was wondering if u could write some more to fill in the gaps, like what happened during the break and how the hood ended up in jail. Also, could u plz change some of the stories so they're sequals to others u've written. I know its a lot to ask, but I think they could be even better that way. Also, could you write about how Alan is going in his thunderbird training, and which thunderbird he likes best?

MiraculousLadybug07
4/7/2013 c15 norly
Yes, I would look forward to a sequel Can you kill the Hood in the sequel. Really hate the guy.
1/17/2013 c15 bubzchoc
brilliant
1/16/2013 c15 73JOTRACY123
Loved every moment of this story. Looking forward to seeing more from you xxx well done
1/15/2013 c15 129Jeanny
You have such nice style and good plot throughout. You may want to consider getting a beta or a spellchecker, I hope you do and that you keep writing!
1/14/2013 c15 FabinaForever11
Loved it! I'm glad you didn't give up on it after fan fiction took it down. I hope you do a sequel, you left it at a good spot for one! :D
1/14/2013 c15 72criminally charmed
Go Alan! Love it when he shows that kind of maturity and responsibilty.
1/7/2013 c14 MJ
Glad Alan is the mend. Although I doubt the Hood will ever leave him alone.
1/7/2013 c14 FabinaForever11
Awesome!:)
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