for Her Savior12/15/2012 c1 
9illuminazione
This is great. It's very emotional and Vash being her savior was perfect. Poor Lili.
yours
satori
9illuminazioneThis is great. It's very emotional and Vash being her savior was perfect. Poor Lili.
yours
satori
11/22/2012 c1 2Shaman Shinobi
:D Could you make anoher chapter, like how Vash meets with Lili again or something, or maybe hires her (as a servant) or something like that to give her money without making her feel too guilty? :) Love the pistol addition, it's not Switzerland without his guns :D Oh! He could be an arms dealer ;P
2Shaman Shinobi:D Could you make anoher chapter, like how Vash meets with Lili again or something, or maybe hires her (as a servant) or something like that to give her money without making her feel too guilty? :) Love the pistol addition, it's not Switzerland without his guns :D Oh! He could be an arms dealer ;P
11/2/2012 c1 1Tipsyrainbow
My friend flamingrubes recomended you to me... so... i see your a hetalia fan? ;3
1TipsyrainbowMy friend flamingrubes recomended you to me... so... i see your a hetalia fan? ;3
10/23/2012 c1 8SatanLordofDarkness
Um... its good, but isnt she a little too young to sell herself? O_o
8SatanLordofDarknessUm... its good, but isnt she a little too young to sell herself? O_o
10/23/2012 c1 6IncomprehensibleSparks
Beautiful. I'd definitely read this, if you ever did decide to write more.
6IncomprehensibleSparksBeautiful. I'd definitely read this, if you ever did decide to write more.