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3/27/2019 c34 Guest
You know what be ingesting if piccalo and turles overthrow vageta because vageta was being even more ruthless then freiza so they decide to organize a plan so then piccalo and turles travel to namek for the dragon balls and when they attain the dragon balls they wish these 3 wishes for piccalo father to come back turles to have his tail back and tell them the secret of this so called super saiyan so then when the dragon tells them the answer he smirks and looks at king piccalo confuse he then smirks and says so you need my help son but piccalo has none of it and grabs him by the neck and force fuse with him he then became strong so strong he can take on freiza without breaking a sweat as for turles he gets jealous of this increase and tells him I have a idea you will be helping me with this super saiyan and help me control my inner beast and make my tail immune to anything and then I will combine these two powerful transformations together so they then punch in the codes for earth and in like 3 months they get there going to kamis look out and tells piccalo I know what your here for and I refuse to fuse with you I can sense my other half inside of you I won’t be WITH THAT FOOL piccalo then goes on fine but we need training popo says how about the hyperbolic time chamber they both look back confused kami responds there a room that lets you train for a year in 1 day piccalo then thinks and screams we can use that for a few years then kami then says you can but then was cut off by turles saying be quiet old man so then they get in there training actually staying for 6 years longer then they expected but when they came they came out they were both battered badly but turles had spiky golden hair piccalo has gain strength piccalo power full power 30 million while turles is 35 million but then they nodded to Kami and flew off having a little conversation piccalo said so what are we going to do when we beat vageta turles said we need to kill him there no telling how strong he can get piccalo smirked sounds good they then they went faster turles talked through the pod and told piccalo contact vageta and tell him we lived he proceeded and called up vageta far away vageta was shown in a planet the sky was a light blue and then showed someone shining vageta boots a soldier comes in lord vageta there someone calling you will you accept vageta said who the hell could it be yes answer it then a hologram showed piccalo vageta looks in surprise what do you want you trash piccalo cleated his throat and said well vageta me and turles want to serve under you vageta laughed and said very well green man I’m on planet frost I will be looking forward to see you two clowns then the hologram came off vageta seemed slightly annoyed and shot a thin beam at the solder leg and the soldier said thank you lord vageta in a frighten tone then left then far away piccalo told Turles planet frost is were we need to go so then like that they both left a whole week pass by the pod lands on a flat surface they were then getting out the pod being escorted till they see the former prince smirking and saying so you two idiots decided to actually decide to join me and then says you can both be the third class warriors and looks at turles won’t be different for you but you my green friend will get use to that title then looks at turles so you manage to grow your tail back how intresting such a useless thing though then begins to walk off piccalo then looks at turles as he nods then turles flys towards vageta about to hit in the back of his head to only see a mirage you really think I’m that stupid and then throws a ki blast blasting turles and picccalo off balance piccalo powers up to 100 percent while turles powers up to his super saiyan form but vageta he suprise and says BUT IM IMMM THE ONLY SUPER SAIYAN then turns super saiyan and rushes at turles they were both having a even batte till vageta powered up to 50 million piccalo mouth went open tthey thenclwsh turles wins at th end and they rule but they are good guys
3/27/2019 c34 Guest
You know what be ingesting if piccalo and turles overthrow vageta because vageta was being even more ruthless then freiza so they decide to organize a plan so then piccalo and turles travel to namek for the dragon balls and when they attain the dragon balls they wish these 3 wishes for piccalo father to come back turles to have his tail back and tell them the secret of this so called super saiyan so then when the dragon tells them the answer he smirks and looks at king piccalo confuse he then smirks and says so you need my help son but piccalo has none of it and grabs him by the neck and force fuse with him he then became strong so strong he can take on freiza without breaking a sweat as for turles he gets jealous of this increase and tells him I have a idea you will be helping me with this super saiyan and help me control my inner beast and make my tail immune to anything and then I will combine these two powerful transformations together so they then punch in the codes for earth and in like 3 months they get there going to kamis look out and tells piccalo I know what your here for and I refuse to fuse with you I can sense my other half inside of you I won’t be WITH THAT FOOL piccalo then goes on fine but we need training popo says how about the hyperbolic time chamber they both look back confused kami responds there a room that lets you train for a year in 1 day piccalo then thinks and screams we can use that for a few years then kami then says you can but then was cut off by turles saying be quiet old man so then they get in there training actually staying for 6 years longer then they expected but when they came they came out they were both battered badly but turles had spiky golden hair piccalo has gain strength piccalo power full power 30 million while turles is 35 million but then they nodded to Kami and flew off having a little conversation piccalo said so what are we going to do when we beat vageta turles said we need to kill him there no telling how strong he can get piccalo smirked sounds good they then they went faster turles talked through the pod and told piccalo contact vageta and tell him we lived he proceeded and called up vageta far away vageta was shown in a planet the sky was a light blue and then showed someone shining vageta boots a soldier comes in lord vageta there someone calling you will you accept vageta said who the hell could it be yes answer it then a hologram showed piccalo vageta looks in surprise what do you want you trash piccalo cleated his throat and said well vageta me and turles want to serve under you vageta laughed and said very well green man I’m on planet frost I will be looking forward to see you two clowns then the hologram came off vageta seemed slightly annoyed and shot a thin beam at the solder leg and the soldier said thank you lord vageta in a frighten tone then left then far away piccalo told Turles planet frost is were we need to go so then like that they both left a whole week pass by the pod lands on a flat surface they were then getting out the pod being escorted till they see the former prince smirking and saying so you two idiots decided to actually decide to join me and then says you can both be the third class warriors and looks at turles won’t be different for you but you my green friend will get use to that title then looks at turles so you manage to grow your tail back how intresting such a useless thing though then begins to walk off piccalo then looks at turles as he nods then turles flys towards vageta about to hit in the back of his head to only see a mirage you really think I’m that stupid and then throws a ki blast blasting turles and picccalo off balance piccalo powers up to 100 percent while turles powers up to his super saiyan form but vageta he suprise and says BUT IM IMMM THE ONLY SUPER SAIYAN then turns super saiyan and rushes at turles they were both having a even batte till vageta powered up to 50 million piccalo look in horror that power but how but turles tells his companion he has something that vageta does not have and then throws a orb up in the air Screaming burst open and mix he then feels the primal instincts coming in but then controls it turning into a great ape then transforms into a super saiyan and then laughs at vageta this is the end of you vageta then became scared dodging all the fury of hits turles is giving him then piccalo grunts I need to help him just in case his tail gets ripped off but turles feels like he can get more power he just missing something like something is blocking his way but then ignores it fighting vageta beating him into a pulp piccalo then begins to power up a beam as much as he can vageta though was getting aggravated he then proceeds to blow up the fake moon making turles curse out loud how can he let him destroy the moon he thinks it be at least a hour till I can transform again but then gets a hard blow from his cheek making him fly back the fight proceeds for about 20 minutes Turles is bearly hanging on to life vageta was to focus on turles to see what was going to plan turles then says the word CANNON piccalo nods and then turning giant ehancing the power of the blast and the size of it it then hits vageta square on killing them they then rule the universe later on but they were defenders against pirates

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1/17/2017 c26 KeinNiemand
Vegeta is Waaaaaaay to weak for him beeing a super Sayain the mulier of Super Sayain 1 is 50x as strong as the Base form so when his Powerlevel in baseform is 4 million his Powerlevel as super Sayain is 200 million not 20 million! When it is 20 million Super Sayain is only 5 times stronger then the Base form witch is even weaker then Ozaro But Super Saian is MUCH STRONGER then Ozzaro.
If you don't know the mulipiers for the diffrent forms here is a list (witout GT stuff becouse it is non canon)
SSJ22xSSJ1, SSJ34xSSJ2, SSJGSSJ3, SSJBSSJG

I also don't Like the way Vegeta became a super saiyan becouse noramaly rage is the trigger to becoume a super Saiyan and vegeta became SSJ after he has alrady given up
1/16/2017 c15 KeinNiemand
I Wonder in they will Revive Nappa Unsing Ruhe Dragon balls
1/17/2017 c26 KeinNiemand
Super Saiyan is 50 Times not 5 Times
1/13/2017 c9 KeinNiemand
The Gravity Training Schlund have Bern more effeective for goku remember Hof much Stangen he was After Training only for a gewesen days on the was to namek
I really don't like the fact that goku is so Weak he is Even Weaker then raddiz (Maybe on hin Level) and I have a feeling that he will be the weakinst Saiyan for the Rest of the ff and that he will Never Surpass vegeta (unless he gets some Kind of big Boost that vegeta and the ohters don't geht)
1/13/2017 c8 KeinNiemand
It seems like vegeta is gönn aber the First super saiyans in this ff
Will goku die in the Future so he can Train with King kai?
Will this ff end with the Buu Saga or will it Continue to Dragonball super Please Continue this ff to Dragonball super After the Buu sage
1/13/2017 c4 KeinNiemand
I Hope that gohan will become Strenger later
Radizz Thinks je is Useless I Hope that Somthing Happens that Males gohan Rely Angry and unlocks bis potentail and After that he mighty geht Trainend by piccolo Or someone else
12/31/2016 c1 Dustin375
grate kipe going
12/26/2016 c34 Jredd
Aaaah! It's so good! I need more :D.
12/22/2016 c7 Jack905
Looking good so far.
11/18/2016 c9 19Pie 555
No the Moon! Hey, will you incorporate the great ape transformation in this fic? Cus its always been forgotten about and left in the dust.
11/2/2016 c33 3Darth Nightmaricus
Please update!
11/2/2016 c7 Darth Nightmaricus
Yay, Appule lives!

I love that guy...
6/29/2016 c5 Cjbeast3000
You probably don't know this but everyone except Master Roshi and minor support characters knew how to fly before Raditz. Goku only used Nimbus because he is kinda lazy and is nostalgic. Against Piccolo Junior Goku clearly knew how to fly in canon. He even used Nimbus when he was revived on earth during the Saiyan arc, an arc we see him fly all the time. This shows that he is either lazy or tries to save energy.
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