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1/25/2014 c1 Callum Mead-Hansen
Good store you should make a part 2
9/26/2013 c1 2StarCorrsin
Nice chapter it really stood out and was nicely written
10/30/2012 c1 Luna the wolf
This is a very good the wolf ..., OUT!
10/24/2012 c1 5finallyexploded
What to say...

For the first few paragraphs, it looked like it might be a self insert. Thank goodness.

I'm very glad I read this story, and must say, this is great for a first. Your grammar and spelling are beautiful. I could take lessons from you.

"My fur was poufy"
No other typos/grammar errors noticed.

The story reminded me of Redwall. No, not the style. The characters. You have a few "enemies" throughout the story, with interesting species, like lynxes. There is the same type of "evilness" about the bad guys and same type of "playful fun" about the good guys. It was a nice surprise.

The plot is very over-used. Character "A" is orphan who meets with Power Rangers and transforms into Superman! It is cliche. Then again, most plots are.

The writing style is captivating, and I read through with no bother. Very enjoyable. I hope you make more.

Welcome to Fanfiction. Improve your summary, by the way.

Good luck with all future projects.

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