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10/27/2012 c2 rinaTheElf
OMG! the best clato story i've ever read! keep going!
10/27/2012 c2 37Ersatz Einstein
I preferred the previous chapter to this one. You have two very noticeable typos, and you tend to overuse words when making a point, rather than searching for viable synonyms. I still love this premise, though.
10/24/2012 c1 41Clato 27
It's so good! Please continue!
10/24/2012 c1 37Ersatz Einstein
I love this. It's well-written, it covers what I believe is a unique angle (although I'll admit that this isn't my usual fandom), and I can't wait to see what happens next. (Just one thing: "We are no longer are enemies" makes no syntactical sense. Please revise.)

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