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11/21/2012 c2 ScorpiusRoseLover
I really love this story...and am very curious to what Jacob said in the past...I hope you update soon!
11/20/2012 c2 Guest
I LOVED IT
11/20/2012 c2 mel
I like your plot but, I can't shake the feeling that you're rushing things. One minute, Nessie hates Jacob (apparently with a good reason) and the next one, she's trying to be friends again just because Kim told her to behave. I know that this is just a story but, no one change their minds so quickly. It kinda makes the character inconsistent.
10/27/2012 c1 Guest
I think it's def worth writing :-)

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