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4/2/2013 c23 VONDON WILES
THAT LAND BEFORE TIME FANFICTION STORY THE FORBIDEN MATING REVISED CHAPTER 23 WAS GREAT AND WHAT IS THE NEXT LAND BEFORE TIME FANFICTION STORY FROM YOU I HOPE IT WILL BE A FOLLOW UP TO THIS STORY
1/19/2013 c2 98Shizuku Tsukishima749
This was pretty darn good! Great work with this! Wonderful writing (noticed a few missing commas, mostly at the top) and great characterization! :D Rock on! I really like this!
1/19/2013 c1 Shizuku Tsukishima749
According to FFN's Guidelines, you're not allowed to have an entire chapter be an A/N. Also, it's obvious that the story is revised from the title, so you don't need to waste summary space with that - put it in the A/N. Also, put the disclaimer in the A/N, not the summary. A summary is for the story's content, nothing else. You can get reported by this stuff, and if you read the Guidelines, you'd know this.

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