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2MetalKing1417
Ooo... I hope Williams, er Tzeentch wins the first contact war. Also, you may want to get a beta reader; there's a few grammatical errors that inhibit this particular chapter's readability.
2MetalKing1417Ooo... I hope Williams, er Tzeentch wins the first contact war. Also, you may want to get a beta reader; there's a few grammatical errors that inhibit this particular chapter's readability.
2/12/2013 c4 22edboy4926
Good chapter
Uh, nice twist. Does that mean that Ashley will be a daemon from birth. I hope that Tzeen/John wins in Shanxi, if he does, he will ironically receive worship for being the first human leader to fight off an alien invasion.
22edboy4926Good chapter
Uh, nice twist. Does that mean that Ashley will be a daemon from birth. I hope that Tzeen/John wins in Shanxi, if he does, he will ironically receive worship for being the first human leader to fight off an alien invasion.
2/7/2013 c3 Anon
Can't wait to see more.
Can't wait to see more.
12/13/2012 c3 Onsholo
CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEED
CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEED
12/13/2012 c1 Onsholo
SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI
SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI SINDRI
12/12/2012 c3 Commissar 106
Ah yes more xenos to die, I approve of this. The only good day is when xenos die and to brighten my day up more is the victory of cadia's tactical genius CCCRREEEEEEEDD! He had me ride on top of the baneblades that flanked those chaos heretics keep it up, even though you name is heretical the emperor approves of more xenos deaths.
Ah yes more xenos to die, I approve of this. The only good day is when xenos die and to brighten my day up more is the victory of cadia's tactical genius CCCRREEEEEEEDD! He had me ride on top of the baneblades that flanked those chaos heretics keep it up, even though you name is heretical the emperor approves of more xenos deaths.
12/12/2012 c3 Commissar 334
CREED STRIKES AGAIN! Tis a good day to be a cadian ONWARD TO VICTORY YOU DOGS!
CREED STRIKES AGAIN! Tis a good day to be a cadian ONWARD TO VICTORY YOU DOGS!
12/12/2012 c3 edboy4926
Good chapter
Nice slaughter
Does the Emperor exist in the ME reality but hiding?
Good chapter
Nice slaughter
Does the Emperor exist in the ME reality but hiding?
12/11/2012 c2 edboy4926
Good story
Looking forward to more.
What timeline have they landed in the ME?
Good story
Looking forward to more.
What timeline have they landed in the ME?
11/14/2012 c2 Commissar 106
Go ahead chaos kill these xeno humping bastards even the emperor you hate would like you for this action although you will still be beaten by cadians imperial guardsmen for you don't screw with the hammer of the emperor.
Go ahead chaos kill these xeno humping bastards even the emperor you hate would like you for this action although you will still be beaten by cadians imperial guardsmen for you don't screw with the hammer of the emperor.
11/15/2012 c1 Blinded in a bolthole
Ahriman serves no master, Only insane, suicidal or foolish allies with Kharn, and Sindri of Alpha Legion has ascended to Daemonhood.
Ahriman serves no master, Only insane, suicidal or foolish allies with Kharn, and Sindri of Alpha Legion has ascended to Daemonhood.