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for The Yoma

12/9/2012 c13 22Sa Rart
You're a beautiful writer, and your story is creative and well-written. You make everyone so human. You make it real. And with your short sentences, the fragments - the heartbeats - you make a chaotic but utterly still world, and it conveys all of the tension and anxiety in the situation. It's beautiful.

I look forward to the next chapter :)

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