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8/26/2014 c3 Guest
I like much
1/6/2014 c2 Guest
Wow this is awesome! (Feel bad for not discovering this sooner, it's 2014 :P) Please continue this!
9/5/2013 c3 Eggman hater
LOL or more accurately LMFAO big time! I want more!
1/19/2013 c3 1SilverWolf1130
11/1/2012 c2 1vampireAlpha52
Uh-oh 0-0


1vampireAlpha52 is out.
11/2/2012 c3 11OMNISENSE95
Okay... I'm going to blame writer's block for the short chapters... and are you even READING my reviews?
11/1/2012 c2 2LilMissDoodle
Ooooo! :o Interesting! Can't wait for an update!
11/1/2012 c2 11OMNISENSE95
Wow... you really know how to build suspense... And really? Shadow sleeps with a Maria doll? Given the condition of your earlier works, I expect that the next couple chapters will be quite a bit longer. But at any rate, I look forward to more!
11/1/2012 c1 5finallyexploded
Homing Attacking,
[If it's not "Homing Attacks," I don't know what you meant]

Lasers firing, Sound
[Lowercase "lasers" and "sound"]

So three errors in the first sentence isn't always the best.
Your story is infected with random caps popping up out of the blue.

Egg-heads failure.
[That would be head's]

Errors show up in quite a few lines. Getting a beta isn't a bad choice. As for humor, I didn't agree with the first review. It was a good idea to label this as "adventure".

Your story has lots of potential, but leave us with a better cliffhanger.

Good luck with all future projects.
10/31/2012 c1 11OMNISENSE95
How did I not notice this story earlier? I bet the coming chapters will be one of the funniest things I've read on this entire site! I look forward to more! Update soon, I'm begging you, please! I so desperatly want to... uh... am I starting to sound pathetic?

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