
1/29/2017 c4 MeAFanficAddict
i am really curious how astoria would be after so many years...
i am really curious how astoria would be after so many years...
8/25/2014 c38
1xx Darcy Girl xx
So I just stayed up until 3:30am to finish this story, and I have to say I'm blown away. You really provide a lot of depth to your characters, and though I don't love how Isobelle's story has ended for now (I haven't yet started the sequel), you really make it easy to feel for your characters and understand why they act the way they do. I really appreciate all the psychology you put into your characters, and the focus you place on their pasts to show how it has effected their future selves - especially since you're so young! I'm an English major with a minor in Psychology (Ironically at the University of South Carolina - I noticed your bio mentioned you were from SC), and I have to say that when I first started reading this story I assumed you were my age, since you write just as well as a large majority of people I know. I think one day you will make an amazing author; keep up the great work!

So I just stayed up until 3:30am to finish this story, and I have to say I'm blown away. You really provide a lot of depth to your characters, and though I don't love how Isobelle's story has ended for now (I haven't yet started the sequel), you really make it easy to feel for your characters and understand why they act the way they do. I really appreciate all the psychology you put into your characters, and the focus you place on their pasts to show how it has effected their future selves - especially since you're so young! I'm an English major with a minor in Psychology (Ironically at the University of South Carolina - I noticed your bio mentioned you were from SC), and I have to say that when I first started reading this story I assumed you were my age, since you write just as well as a large majority of people I know. I think one day you will make an amazing author; keep up the great work!
2/12/2014 c35 Guest
she is an idiot, THIS IS WHY YOU WAIT TO MARRY
she is an idiot, THIS IS WHY YOU WAIT TO MARRY
1/30/2014 c38 MoniqueJ
Loved this story but kind of a disappointing ending. I know this is what isobelle chose but people can make mistakes and change their minds even at the last minute i thought her character was beginning to grow but it feels like she is back at square one again i guess. I hope the sequel will be a good continuation. I would have liked the third story all in belles POV again i like her because i am just like her. I thought there was going to be more draco/Hermione stuff too and what about holden? And ron? And the night isobelle was conceived? Guess its time to start reading this next story...
Loved this story but kind of a disappointing ending. I know this is what isobelle chose but people can make mistakes and change their minds even at the last minute i thought her character was beginning to grow but it feels like she is back at square one again i guess. I hope the sequel will be a good continuation. I would have liked the third story all in belles POV again i like her because i am just like her. I thought there was going to be more draco/Hermione stuff too and what about holden? And ron? And the night isobelle was conceived? Guess its time to start reading this next story...
12/31/2013 c38
1Agarwaen Zentaros
At first I think it's interesting to read more about Isobelle after this story's prequel but she is such an ungrateful whining bitch here.
She was a bit if that in the first story but it's rather understandable since she was young and was going though a lot in one summer.
But this, it's like she is crazy, totally illogical and nothing but a nuisance to the family, if my sister is like her, I would slap some sense into her. She pretty much complain about everything and always find someone to blame.
I think it serves her right to ended up with Simon and Teddy is a masochist here, just like being torture by his dear cousin...it's sick.
Sometimes it's fun to read something rah isn't just happy and has good ending but this is too much.

At first I think it's interesting to read more about Isobelle after this story's prequel but she is such an ungrateful whining bitch here.
She was a bit if that in the first story but it's rather understandable since she was young and was going though a lot in one summer.
But this, it's like she is crazy, totally illogical and nothing but a nuisance to the family, if my sister is like her, I would slap some sense into her. She pretty much complain about everything and always find someone to blame.
I think it serves her right to ended up with Simon and Teddy is a masochist here, just like being torture by his dear cousin...it's sick.
Sometimes it's fun to read something rah isn't just happy and has good ending but this is too much.
12/5/2013 c31 Guest
I am going to stop reading this story. It keeps going on and on and on ... There is no magic involved.. To me that just isnt harry potter, take away the names and it could be about any family..
I am going to stop reading this story. It keeps going on and on and on ... There is no magic involved.. To me that just isnt harry potter, take away the names and it could be about any family..
10/4/2013 c38
2Penguin-Reader96
I'm glad that you posted this chapter. After following Belle's life for two stories I needed some sort of closure. I truly hope that things turn out as well as Simon says they will be. Maybe he will stop cheating on her after all, and they will have a beautiful baby boy and everything will be okay. As the final review for the story I wanted to tell you that I truly enjoyed reading this even though I wanted to strangle Belle at times. Good luck on your new story :)

I'm glad that you posted this chapter. After following Belle's life for two stories I needed some sort of closure. I truly hope that things turn out as well as Simon says they will be. Maybe he will stop cheating on her after all, and they will have a beautiful baby boy and everything will be okay. As the final review for the story I wanted to tell you that I truly enjoyed reading this even though I wanted to strangle Belle at times. Good luck on your new story :)
10/4/2013 c37 Penguin-Reader96
He raped his wife?! They haven't been married for a day and he started to cheat on her? He is an even cheaper bastard than I thought. Also Belle isn't all that better, she cheated on him as well. This is going to be one bad marriage.
He raped his wife?! They haven't been married for a day and he started to cheat on her? He is an even cheaper bastard than I thought. Also Belle isn't all that better, she cheated on him as well. This is going to be one bad marriage.
9/21/2013 c38
1noelle95
Ughhh I dont know if I'm happy or angry about this ending! oh well, going to go start Back to the Start now!

Ughhh I dont know if I'm happy or angry about this ending! oh well, going to go start Back to the Start now!
9/21/2013 c38
3Pug1998
Really really REALLY good epilogue. It was just like a real book! Left you wondering:)

Really really REALLY good epilogue. It was just like a real book! Left you wondering:)
9/21/2013 c38
16Kat-Knife
Poor Isobelle, she just seems so damaged, I've lost all hope that she'll ever have a happy ending with anyone, much less Simon. I really like your writing style and if you're going to become a writer, I think you'd very good at it. You have a gift of creating an original storyline that mirrors real life quite closely. You'd make a very good author and I hope to read one of your original books one day! :)

Poor Isobelle, she just seems so damaged, I've lost all hope that she'll ever have a happy ending with anyone, much less Simon. I really like your writing style and if you're going to become a writer, I think you'd very good at it. You have a gift of creating an original storyline that mirrors real life quite closely. You'd make a very good author and I hope to read one of your original books one day! :)
9/21/2013 c38 Guest
You wrote this story very well...
Belle's behavior drives me nuts... :0)
Mae
You wrote this story very well...
Belle's behavior drives me nuts... :0)
Mae