for The Painful Truth7/30/2013 c1 
5Bowtiesandgracenotes99
I agree with the people saying you should add more detail, but other than that I think this is pretty good and you should definitely keep writing! Can't wait to read the next part!
5Bowtiesandgracenotes99I agree with the people saying you should add more detail, but other than that I think this is pretty good and you should definitely keep writing! Can't wait to read the next part!
10/30/2012 c1 midnight
ok its a good start but be sure to add a little more detial, but not to much. that way more people will read and review. good luck and i hope to read more
ok its a good start but be sure to add a little more detial, but not to much. that way more people will read and review. good luck and i hope to read more
10/30/2012 c1 Guest
U should contiune this story it very intersting
U should contiune this story it very intersting
11/1/2012 c2 F1nal Front1er
I agree with the last person; this chapter seems to be rushed through. Then again, as long as you have something to write about, it shouldn't be that big of a deal. I can't wait to see what Danny does now!
I agree with the last person; this chapter seems to be rushed through. Then again, as long as you have something to write about, it shouldn't be that big of a deal. I can't wait to see what Danny does now!
10/30/2012 c2 DragonsFlame117
This chapter felt a little rushed, but I like the fact his parents accepted him. And I like how this is turning out so far. I hope Danny can be rescued!
This chapter felt a little rushed, but I like the fact his parents accepted him. And I like how this is turning out so far. I hope Danny can be rescued!
10/30/2012 c1 Ulimo
Ooh, the good ol' Cliffie! Can't wait to see where you bring this. I hope Sam and Tuck will be able to help. Yea, it is a lite short, but it is better then most first fics I've read. I hope you do continue this. Until next time!
Ulimo
Ooh, the good ol' Cliffie! Can't wait to see where you bring this. I hope Sam and Tuck will be able to help. Yea, it is a lite short, but it is better then most first fics I've read. I hope you do continue this. Until next time!
Ulimo