
12/1/2016 c1 Guest
Lovely! ..and sensitive, smart, very Peter-ish way to approach the issue brilliant, careless, very Neal-ish way to counter-comment..
And truly loved the my-people point (touched question included of course)!
Thanks
Lovely! ..and sensitive, smart, very Peter-ish way to approach the issue brilliant, careless, very Neal-ish way to counter-comment..
And truly loved the my-people point (touched question included of course)!
Thanks
11/4/2012 c1
18True Love Lives Forever
I liked how you wrote this story and both Peter's and Neal's points of view. It was great to see Peter so worried about Neal and on their first case together.

I liked how you wrote this story and both Peter's and Neal's points of view. It was great to see Peter so worried about Neal and on their first case together.
10/31/2012 c1 Guest
THAT WAS GREAT. COULD SEE AND HEAR IT ALL CLEARLY YOU CAPTURED THEM PERFECTLY! THANKYOU
THAT WAS GREAT. COULD SEE AND HEAR IT ALL CLEARLY YOU CAPTURED THEM PERFECTLY! THANKYOU
10/31/2012 c1 Guest
Love this take. Keep writing!
Love this take. Keep writing!
10/31/2012 c1 Ansel
This was so-o good!
This was so-o good!
10/31/2012 c1 Gloworm41
Great job on this - I could just visualize Neal's expression when he realized Peter thought of him as one of his team.
Great job on this - I could just visualize Neal's expression when he realized Peter thought of him as one of his team.