for Over The Edge6/23/2013 c8 
21briroch
I'm glad Steve and Mike aare on talking terms again. The reconciliation scene was great, really true to character, temper flaring but not for long, because the strong relationship is there. Looking forward to more!
21brirochI'm glad Steve and Mike aare on talking terms again. The reconciliation scene was great, really true to character, temper flaring but not for long, because the strong relationship is there. Looking forward to more!
6/20/2013 c8 67honu59
Nice chapter! I liked the description of the trophy case and pictures at the university - very realistic. The chase was great and I could see Steve and his thoughts and actions were in character, I thought. Aw...nice thoughts at the end from Mike about Steve eventually making Lieutenant! Looking forward to more!
67honu59Nice chapter! I liked the description of the trophy case and pictures at the university - very realistic. The chase was great and I could see Steve and his thoughts and actions were in character, I thought. Aw...nice thoughts at the end from Mike about Steve eventually making Lieutenant! Looking forward to more!
6/19/2013 c8 Autumrose
This was great, hopefully Hartman will get what's coming to him both father and son, thanks for the update I can't wait to ser what happens next:-)
This was great, hopefully Hartman will get what's coming to him both father and son, thanks for the update I can't wait to ser what happens next:-)
4/22/2013 c7 Autumrose
Yes! He finally vot what he deserved! You go Steve! I think aftet seeing the picture he is putting 2 and 2 together, can't wait to see what happens next
Yes! He finally vot what he deserved! You go Steve! I think aftet seeing the picture he is putting 2 and 2 together, can't wait to see what happens next
4/22/2013 c7 108mcatB
Go Steve, go! Not happy that Steve threw a punch-don't want him getting in trouble - even if Hartman deserved it! Thanks for the new chapter!
108mcatBGo Steve, go! Not happy that Steve threw a punch-don't want him getting in trouble - even if Hartman deserved it! Thanks for the new chapter!
4/22/2013 c7 30TSOSF site
Whew! Exciting and the tension really built throughout the chapter. Even the opening scene where Steve is looking at the file - very real to the show. I could see that scene playing out.
30TSOSF siteWhew! Exciting and the tension really built throughout the chapter. Even the opening scene where Steve is looking at the file - very real to the show. I could see that scene playing out.
4/22/2013 c7 67honu59
Steve, he's such a hothead! Good thing there were others in the office to hold him back. I can just feel his anger through your words. (Surely there are severe penalties for striking a fellow police officer?) And that tattoo! Steve recognizes the tattoo. A small detail, but it is enough to further the investigation. Looking forward to your next update!
67honu59Steve, he's such a hothead! Good thing there were others in the office to hold him back. I can just feel his anger through your words. (Surely there are severe penalties for striking a fellow police officer?) And that tattoo! Steve recognizes the tattoo. A small detail, but it is enough to further the investigation. Looking forward to your next update!
4/12/2013 c6 30TSOSF site
I don't like this Hartman! I can't wait to see him get what he deserves. Great chapter!
30TSOSF siteI don't like this Hartman! I can't wait to see him get what he deserves. Great chapter!
4/9/2013 c6 67honu59
Good chapter with Jeff feeling torn by his line of questioning, but proceding anyway, hoping to clear his son. And Jeannie is left feeling uneasy from the whole interview and is keeping the details from Mike. This is a very realistic assessment of her inner emotions and the conflict she feels. Also really like this:
Maybe it's Steve. She marvelled at how this thought somehow chased away all the frightening images and made her feel safe.
This made me smile!
67honu59Good chapter with Jeff feeling torn by his line of questioning, but proceding anyway, hoping to clear his son. And Jeannie is left feeling uneasy from the whole interview and is keeping the details from Mike. This is a very realistic assessment of her inner emotions and the conflict she feels. Also really like this:
Maybe it's Steve. She marvelled at how this thought somehow chased away all the frightening images and made her feel safe.
This made me smile!
4/9/2013 c6 43Swissmounty
It's so good to know that Jeannie has some good friends (one in particular) and a strong, smart father. These Hartmann guys will be for the high jump when they find out what's going on!
And thank you so much for caring, Tanith, that was so sweet of you! Just give me a few days...
43SwissmountyIt's so good to know that Jeannie has some good friends (one in particular) and a strong, smart father. These Hartmann guys will be for the high jump when they find out what's going on!
And thank you so much for caring, Tanith, that was so sweet of you! Just give me a few days...
4/8/2013 c6 Autumrose
Oh thst man is a pain, poor Jeannie , Mike and Steve will both be very unhappy, especially when the truth comes out and we all know it will
Oh thst man is a pain, poor Jeannie , Mike and Steve will both be very unhappy, especially when the truth comes out and we all know it will
4/8/2013 c6 attyboy
That man is just plain evil! Hope Jeannie finds her confidence and goes to mike or Steve. Can wait to see where this is going.
That man is just plain evil! Hope Jeannie finds her confidence and goes to mike or Steve. Can wait to see where this is going.
4/8/2013 c6 mom13
Fantastic kept me on the edge of my seat. Poor Mike you capture his protective nature perfectly.
Fantastic kept me on the edge of my seat. Poor Mike you capture his protective nature perfectly.
4/1/2013 c5 Autumrose
Great story, I wanna punch Hartman, i'm sure i'm not the only one (LOL) I know Mike and Steve will find out abiut them, looking forward to more
Great story, I wanna punch Hartman, i'm sure i'm not the only one (LOL) I know Mike and Steve will find out abiut them, looking forward to more