for Fun With Math3/17/2014 c3 Guest
I've put in you next story, so don't worry !
Plus after reading this one...well I like the other one better.
Keep at it !
The Crimson Mage.
I've put in you next story, so don't worry !
Plus after reading this one...well I like the other one better.
Keep at it !
The Crimson Mage.
4/19/2013 c2 
56adavisa
Very nice, and I had figured thats why Harry said what he did. Too bad Sirius was a bastard
56adavisaVery nice, and I had figured thats why Harry said what he did. Too bad Sirius was a bastard
3/25/2013 c1 Guest
Alright, credit where credit is due... At least everyone was focused on the fact Harry liked a Slytheren and not that he liked a guy. That's kind of a British mindset.
That said... The fuck is wrong with you?
Your characters are weak, and are driven solely by their loins. The "sneaky move" was completely bull shit, and lastly... Snape couldn't bang Lilly so he'll bang Harry instead? That's just fucked up.
Alright, credit where credit is due... At least everyone was focused on the fact Harry liked a Slytheren and not that he liked a guy. That's kind of a British mindset.
That said... The fuck is wrong with you?
Your characters are weak, and are driven solely by their loins. The "sneaky move" was completely bull shit, and lastly... Snape couldn't bang Lilly so he'll bang Harry instead? That's just fucked up.
11/1/2012 c2 Guest
This story need's a bit of work but I can see where you were trying to go !
Because of this I give you: Two bronze stars.
Hope you try again.
The Crimson Mage.
This story need's a bit of work but I can see where you were trying to go !
Because of this I give you: Two bronze stars.
Hope you try again.
The Crimson Mage.
10/31/2012 c1 Guest
Wait what?! Now I'm totally confused. Harry and Blaise were FAKING their two year romantic relatioship because Harry was secretly crushing on Draco and Severus, and Blaise helped Harry 'pretend' to be in love with each other for two years? If it was all pretend WHY was Harry planning to PROPOSE marriage to Blaise the day before Blaise was kidnapped by Voldemort during the death eater recruitment drive? If he was only pretending to love Blaise and vice versa, why plan to propose at all if he didn't REALLY love Blaise as much as he loved Draco and Severus?
Wait what?! Now I'm totally confused. Harry and Blaise were FAKING their two year romantic relatioship because Harry was secretly crushing on Draco and Severus, and Blaise helped Harry 'pretend' to be in love with each other for two years? If it was all pretend WHY was Harry planning to PROPOSE marriage to Blaise the day before Blaise was kidnapped by Voldemort during the death eater recruitment drive? If he was only pretending to love Blaise and vice versa, why plan to propose at all if he didn't REALLY love Blaise as much as he loved Draco and Severus?