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3/17/2014 c10 Guest
I quite liked your stories they were very good though I will say I have strong dislike for the 4th story but that's just because I missed the part when you said it was mature and I don't ever read those sort of stories...it's probably the only reason why I didnt mark this as a favorite story but I had to at least right a comment. I especially liked the first and last chapter. The first because the way you wrote their interaction was so completely in character but had the right amount of sweet that fit with their personalities and of course the last because of the struggle he had to age and long to be with rukia was quite fitting. Thank you for the good read:)
1/24/2014 c10 27hunterofcomedy
That was a wonderful tale of love, loss and growing old. It warmed my heart and the ending was absolutely perfect, giving us a happy ending to Ichigo's long live, a live he waited to start again after death. This is by far my favorite chapter.

Keep up the amazing work and happy writing! :D
1/23/2014 c9 hunterofcomedy
That one was sweet and very in-character. Very well done my friend!
10/3/2013 c8 1Melime14
Hahahaha bunny rukia is so funny! The ending was adorable too! :)
9/15/2013 c8 4teshichan
It was a hellafun to read too! :) the only OOC part is the last part anyway so no biggies. :) plot is too cuuuuute!
7/31/2013 c3 27hunterofcomedy
You did a great job with this chapter. Like you, I don't hate Orihime, I just don't find her to be that interesting of a character, but that's me. However, I'm not a fan of all the bashing she gets and think that it was great that she got her own kind of happy ending with Uryu. I'm a fan of that pairing too.

Either way, great work and I can't wait to read more!
7/21/2013 c6 1ShiraNoMai
So I've been following your little drabble-collection for a while and decided now that I should review XD; I usually have a lot of things to say to my favorite fanfics, so I get lazy and don't review until the very end, but I felt like I can give you a decent review without being lazy. Pointless ramblings.
Anyway, I really love this collection! I have to say, seeing you being a Flo made this a plus. XD; I thought it might have been a coincidence that you chose Flo for one of the drabbles, but seeing it again, yay. Appropriate song-ties, too, might I add.

Commenting on this specific chapter/drabble, I actually really loved your grasp on the characters and their personalities/stories. Each reaction was perfect/on point, down to Rukia's uncomfortable-ness in those kind of situations (See: When Karakura High students asked if Rukia liked Ichigo at the beginning of Bleach). Rangiku's character was definitely in character to what you put her in; I didn't catch anything to be OOC, other than the possibility of pitting that question on her with Orihime around, as she knows her feelings for Ichigo (although, point of the story is central to this question so.. xD;).
EVEN SO, this ending makes me want to see what happens after, but I still think it ended on the right note. Well. Ok, second-guessing myself now. *stares contemplatively at ending* I think even if Yuzu was the character in the right flow of the story to end it on, I think it was Rangiku's turn to give it that final punch. How, I haven't a clue. I don't write anymore, but I enjoy criticizing it for some reason. I'm very critical with my fanfiction (because 90% of it is crap), so because you made something great, I'm going to let you have that final call. ...that sentence made no sense, but oh well. XD
1/27/2013 c5 4teshichan
Fluffy fluff fluff! Love it :)

Their interactions are soooo in character (well, there is the hug... But hey, it's a few years after the manga so we'll never know ;))

Didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors. Good job! :)

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon!
1/27/2013 c2 26IchiRukiLover
Haha! Nice one! :D
1/27/2013 c1 IchiRukiLover
This was... how do I put it? It was just beautiful. It was amazing. It was one of the best fan-fics I've ever read! They were kept in character, and the descriptions were amazing! And the subtle hints of IchiRuki were great! xp
1/12/2013 c4 wickedliz
The intensity worked really well with the simple, sweet domesticity. It seemed very them, and was easy to picture.

I'll never be able to listen to that Florence The Machine song in the same way again though _
12/1/2012 c3 Guest
Loove it !
11/7/2012 c2 wickedliz lj
I liked the back-handed approach. Rukia is adorably clueless (as she is prone to being) and Ichigo is all in denial (as he is prone to being).

But my favourite part was just them spending time together as a family. The manga is so dramatic that we miss out on the normal moments that must have happened in between. Karin's misery and Ichigo's instinct to flee make it really entertaining.
11/8/2012 c2 4teshichan
Your stories are nicely written. Very easy to imagine each scene.

Hope you update soon with flufier fics! :)
11/1/2012 c1 2The Clawed Butterfly
it was cute.. i would have wanted to know what happened after :D
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