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6/12 c1 Cody Smith1
win is the next chapter of digiblech
6/6 c1 3Elymora90
Also Dai x Shoto Todoroki
6/6 c1 Elymora90
Can you continue the episode Beach babe I want to know what happens between Dai and Toshiro

Can you make more Fem Dai x Bleach/Sword art online would also be cool/And add more Dai x Koichi or Koji

PLEASE... XD
5/15 c152 Knight Rider Zero
like to read another version of Rinsuke (RinaXDavis)
4/26 c151 2Shade Sparda
Can u do one with female daisuke and izuku midoriya please
4/26 c152 HuangBaiLian
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you so much for updating! Please please please please please update again soon! I beg of you! I can't wait for more!
4/26 c152 4Foxythepiratefox0504
Okay...I am going to be blunt with my opinion of you, your writing of this version of Daisuke is low-key white-washy, from the time you began writing I noticed you used the Japanese name at first but as it progressed, it has lead to Davin, Davey, then to Daisy, idk if it's you self-inerting to hell about this, but I feel sort fo iffy with it

Secondly, how you write the world interaction around Daisuke, it seems like everyone bows down to her whims and sees no fault in her, or if they do, they are the bad guy, you've written her to be a Mary-Sue caricature, and it's gotten worse over the years, and I see no end in sight, plus the fact that these oneshots prove to me you are self-inserting so you can essentially smooch the characters you like, you have both identified Daisuke for the men she likes, and as well as her 'super amazing chosen one' complex

Another thing I see is the downgrade your writing style has had since this year, your cutting down paragraphs until they make simple sentences, causing downgrades in quality, while I claim to be no expert in writing(English is not my first language and I RP more than writing) I do think you should consider getting a few writing lessons.

Idk if this will reach you, or if it will be deleted, but please consider re-evualating how you write Daisuke
4/26 c150 15Team Daisuke Motomiya
Part 2 maybe?
4/25 c152 Wishfull-star
That was lovely and I'd like to see this pairing continued if you can, thanks for writing this one shot:)
4/25 c152 1Amethyst-Pheonix2003
This could be a interesting full story. Like to read your snippets!
3/8 c38 NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD
it would be really nice if you turned this one shot into a story.
3/8 c22 NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD
cool one shot it would be really nice if you turned this one shot into a story.
3/8 c20 NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD
really cool one shot it would be really nice if you turned this one shot into a story
3/8 c18 NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD
really cool one shot it would be really nice if you turned this one shot into a story.
3/8 c16 NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD
it would be really cool if you turned this one shot into a story.
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