for What I've Become11/6/2012 c1 
11Laughy-Taffy the Grape
I really wish the Dragon had just kept his mouth shut for once and not told Merlin what Mordred would become. It makes me really curious as to how things would have turned out if Merlin had never known. But this is so sad! I really want to like Mordred, because he doesn't seem like a bad person! *sigh*
In the last sentence, 'life' should be 'live'.
11Laughy-Taffy the GrapeI really wish the Dragon had just kept his mouth shut for once and not told Merlin what Mordred would become. It makes me really curious as to how things would have turned out if Merlin had never known. But this is so sad! I really want to like Mordred, because he doesn't seem like a bad person! *sigh*
In the last sentence, 'life' should be 'live'.
11/5/2012 c1 5Bottled Sunshine
Short but powerful. It really isn't the Dragon's fault, is it? Merlin's concern is 100% "Arthur would live" - not fulfilling his destiny to unite Albion or bring back magic. ...Although whether Arthur will live or not remains to be seen.
5Bottled SunshineShort but powerful. It really isn't the Dragon's fault, is it? Merlin's concern is 100% "Arthur would live" - not fulfilling his destiny to unite Albion or bring back magic. ...Although whether Arthur will live or not remains to be seen.