for When All Good Things Come To an End4/23/2016 c42 hhhhhh
ok! i'll wait!
ok! i'll wait!
8/30/2015 c42 
2Secret Companion
Take your time :D im sure your viewers will be here as your rewrites start. I know I will be this story is amazing and so is your writing.
2Secret CompanionTake your time :D im sure your viewers will be here as your rewrites start. I know I will be this story is amazing and so is your writing.
5/2/2015 c41 8tapeandblades
This is actually one of my favourite fanfictions EVER. Please please please update before I die from withdrawal it's amazing! Your plots are just incredible. You should be so proud of your writing, seriously.
8tapeandbladesThis is actually one of my favourite fanfictions EVER. Please please please update before I die from withdrawal it's amazing! Your plots are just incredible. You should be so proud of your writing, seriously.
1/14/2015 c40 theabridgedkuriboh
YOOOOOO THAT ENDING. I didn't know he walked in on them? Yo. That's so unexpected. I WANT TAMAKI TO BE HAPPY WITH KYOYA BUT THERE'S ALSO ECLAIR. UGH. HOW DO YOU FIX THIS?
YOOOOOO THAT ENDING. I didn't know he walked in on them? Yo. That's so unexpected. I WANT TAMAKI TO BE HAPPY WITH KYOYA BUT THERE'S ALSO ECLAIR. UGH. HOW DO YOU FIX THIS?
12/29/2014 c39 Johnneedstogetalife
Hello! So I'm sorry that this is the first time that I've reviewed this magical story, but I'm finally all caught up on it, so I should be able to review from now on. First of all, this is a great story. The plot is great, it's well written, and, of course, it stars my OTP. I really don't have too many notes on it so far. I just feel like you should try to proofread your chapters before you post it, or get a spellcheck or something because although it's really well written, there tend to be random misspellings, and wrong terms (for example pale is like pale skin, pail is bucket) you also use then rather than than a lot, but it's fine; we all know what you mean. Then is like 'I'll do this then that' it's used for things like time, though it's used in other cases as well. Than is like 'I would rather do this than that' so like opposed to, or instead of. Like I said, these are used in many different ways, so maybe those examples weren't enough, but you get the point. Also, the word too is like as well as, or too much. So 'they did this, too.' is how you would use it because 'they did this to' would be an incomplete sentence implying something completely different.
Now, sorry, I'm being rude. I don't mean to come in here and try to give you some kind of English lesson or something, I'm just trying to help because I've found things like this throughout the story.
I actually really love this whole thing, so thank you for doing such an amazing job so far!
I have no idea what's going to happen next, but I'm excited to find out, so keep up the great work! You've managed to keep all of the characters relatively in character despite all that's going on around them, so good work with that.
Anyways, just keep doing what you're doing, and I can't wait for the next update!
Hello! So I'm sorry that this is the first time that I've reviewed this magical story, but I'm finally all caught up on it, so I should be able to review from now on. First of all, this is a great story. The plot is great, it's well written, and, of course, it stars my OTP. I really don't have too many notes on it so far. I just feel like you should try to proofread your chapters before you post it, or get a spellcheck or something because although it's really well written, there tend to be random misspellings, and wrong terms (for example pale is like pale skin, pail is bucket) you also use then rather than than a lot, but it's fine; we all know what you mean. Then is like 'I'll do this then that' it's used for things like time, though it's used in other cases as well. Than is like 'I would rather do this than that' so like opposed to, or instead of. Like I said, these are used in many different ways, so maybe those examples weren't enough, but you get the point. Also, the word too is like as well as, or too much. So 'they did this, too.' is how you would use it because 'they did this to' would be an incomplete sentence implying something completely different.
Now, sorry, I'm being rude. I don't mean to come in here and try to give you some kind of English lesson or something, I'm just trying to help because I've found things like this throughout the story.
I actually really love this whole thing, so thank you for doing such an amazing job so far!
I have no idea what's going to happen next, but I'm excited to find out, so keep up the great work! You've managed to keep all of the characters relatively in character despite all that's going on around them, so good work with that.
Anyways, just keep doing what you're doing, and I can't wait for the next update!
12/18/2014 c39 53theabridgedkuriboh
AWWWWW MY HEART IS GONNA SHATTER WHEN KYOYA LEAVES. THIS IS SO NOT OKAY. YOU HAVE ME IN TUG OF WAR.
53theabridgedkuribohAWWWWW MY HEART IS GONNA SHATTER WHEN KYOYA LEAVES. THIS IS SO NOT OKAY. YOU HAVE ME IN TUG OF WAR.
12/8/2014 c38 53theabridgedkuriboh
Damn. You send Eclair off home and then you immediately go to Kyoya. I mean, I want them to be together really bad, but that's messed up! Tamaki you need to end things with Eclair before you destroy her completely. My heart aches for her and I used to hate her guts. But now i just want her to be HAPPY!
53theabridgedkuribohDamn. You send Eclair off home and then you immediately go to Kyoya. I mean, I want them to be together really bad, but that's messed up! Tamaki you need to end things with Eclair before you destroy her completely. My heart aches for her and I used to hate her guts. But now i just want her to be HAPPY!
12/1/2014 c37 theabridgedkuriboh
Awww, I'm glad Tamaki chose that fish. Its kinda like how he is. With a little love and care, he can get better. Or he'll die! We'll see! I can't tell yet!
Awww, I'm glad Tamaki chose that fish. Its kinda like how he is. With a little love and care, he can get better. Or he'll die! We'll see! I can't tell yet!
11/21/2014 c36 53theabridgedkuriboh
I wonder what happened with Tamaki and Eclair. How did Tamaki calm her down?
53theabridgedkuribohI wonder what happened with Tamaki and Eclair. How did Tamaki calm her down?