for Dichotomy (Cain's Contradiction)1/11/2014 c1 Larissa
OH MY, you are a genious! I loved, loved it! Cain's inward is always so interesting :)
OH MY, you are a genious! I loved, loved it! Cain's inward is always so interesting :)
11/27/2012 c1 
28Flamewing80
Wow, that was very well written. Loved it, especially the ending and how Lilith's death was the cause of Cain's insanity in your eyes. It's a very interesting idea.
28Flamewing80Wow, that was very well written. Loved it, especially the ending and how Lilith's death was the cause of Cain's insanity in your eyes. It's a very interesting idea.
11/6/2012 c1 2Kaidou
I like how you wrote Cain in this. Instead of just being insane, you made him three-dimensional, and I'm totally grateful for that. I like reading stories'poems where he has character depth and isn't portrayed as just a flat, one-dimensional insane person. Because, really, people 'crazy or not' aren't like that in real life, at least, not that I know of. Your story'poem is VERY refreshing for me. Thank you so much!
And I especially like the ending 'my sanity starts to fade' after Cain licks the blood from his fingers and relishes it, both crying and laughing. There aren't many people that can make characters believable in less than five hundred words, but you definitely pulled it off. Loved the dialogue between Cain and 'them', it gives a new perspective of how the Krusnik sees the world and the people in it. Makes me wonder what Lilith's Krusnik might think...
Thanks again for writing this, I really enjoyed it!
Kaidou
2KaidouI like how you wrote Cain in this. Instead of just being insane, you made him three-dimensional, and I'm totally grateful for that. I like reading stories'poems where he has character depth and isn't portrayed as just a flat, one-dimensional insane person. Because, really, people 'crazy or not' aren't like that in real life, at least, not that I know of. Your story'poem is VERY refreshing for me. Thank you so much!
And I especially like the ending 'my sanity starts to fade' after Cain licks the blood from his fingers and relishes it, both crying and laughing. There aren't many people that can make characters believable in less than five hundred words, but you definitely pulled it off. Loved the dialogue between Cain and 'them', it gives a new perspective of how the Krusnik sees the world and the people in it. Makes me wonder what Lilith's Krusnik might think...
Thanks again for writing this, I really enjoyed it!
Kaidou