6/28/2014 c10 MUTO TOHO
Uuuuuuuuhhhhhhhh. What the heck just happened. And you forgot to put THE END.
Uuuuuuuuhhhhhhhh. What the heck just happened. And you forgot to put THE END.
6/28/2014 c7 MUTO TOHO
You know ive always wondered since the beginning of this story why is FP calling finn honey, i mean there not married yet so its kinda pointless
You know ive always wondered since the beginning of this story why is FP calling finn honey, i mean there not married yet so its kinda pointless
7/29/2013 c2 Guest
Who gives two shits about a pink wad and a vampire :)
Who gives two shits about a pink wad and a vampire :)
7/23/2013 c10 KinaSakria
They can finally be together and touch each other without Flame Princess hurting Finn! Yayyyyy! : D
Keep up the good work on this story, I really can't wait to read the next chapter c:
They can finally be together and touch each other without Flame Princess hurting Finn! Yayyyyy! : D
Keep up the good work on this story, I really can't wait to read the next chapter c:
7/17/2013 c1 taywinga
This first chapter is breathtaking. It is remarkably consistent and feels as if each word were cunningly wrought in the hopes of each telling a story in their own right. Please continue writing. You have gained my respect as one of my now favorite authors. Please don't disappoint me in the future.
This first chapter is breathtaking. It is remarkably consistent and feels as if each word were cunningly wrought in the hopes of each telling a story in their own right. Please continue writing. You have gained my respect as one of my now favorite authors. Please don't disappoint me in the future.
7/17/2013 c10 16shadow-dog18
aww that was so sweet i say something like that will happen in the end for them 3
aww that was so sweet i say something like that will happen in the end for them 3
7/13/2013 c10 2chistopher
WOHHHHHHHHHHH dAMN! That was SWEEET fINALY! a gOOD ending For the Two
lOVERS sO SWEET!
WOHHHHHHHHHHH dAMN! That was SWEEET fINALY! a gOOD ending For the Two
lOVERS sO SWEET!
7/11/2013 c8 2TheBARHalofan197
I can agree with everyone one the reviews. Please make a sequel. It would do your readers a whole lot of good and we can read more fxf. So please for everyone here, make a sequel. :)
I can agree with everyone one the reviews. Please make a sequel. It would do your readers a whole lot of good and we can read more fxf. So please for everyone here, make a sequel. :)
7/7/2013 c10 2TheBARHalofan197
Get a epilogue to finish the story, the for here was a bit cheesy, I liked how they did what they did, but I just suggest an epilogue. Hope you read this.
Get a epilogue to finish the story, the for here was a bit cheesy, I liked how they did what they did, but I just suggest an epilogue. Hope you read this.
7/7/2013 c10 Guest
Sequal! Sequel! Sequel!
Great story.
Sequal! Sequel! Sequel!
Great story.
7/7/2013 c10 1Trasgo Madaraz Artifex
Aww
i can imagine Finn sayin to PB something like
"Well. . . what can i say? my clothes are not fire prof and one thing leads to another. (3)"
i aprove a secuel, but only if you what to do it.
Aww
i can imagine Finn sayin to PB something like
"Well. . . what can i say? my clothes are not fire prof and one thing leads to another. (3)"
i aprove a secuel, but only if you what to do it.