for Unthinkable Agony1/3/2013 c2 Guest
Oh. My. F******. God. Please write more :D I love where this story is going, continue it omg!
Oh. My. F******. God. Please write more :D I love where this story is going, continue it omg!
1/3/2013 c2 
1Harvest-Mooniac
Ho-ly shite 0.0 I saw this awhile ago when I first started reading Adventure Time fanfics a couple months back and thought it was just a one-shot.
You and SCIK were some of my biggest inspirations to pen my own AT Fanfic, and I'm glad to see you didn't stop writing! :D The amount of detail you use, your ability to keep characters in character, and your portrayal of Finn and FP's relationship just amazes me. Hell, I even reread the story several times because of how much I absolutely loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter, it promises to be even more righteous than the last! :D
1Harvest-MooniacHo-ly shite 0.0 I saw this awhile ago when I first started reading Adventure Time fanfics a couple months back and thought it was just a one-shot.
You and SCIK were some of my biggest inspirations to pen my own AT Fanfic, and I'm glad to see you didn't stop writing! :D The amount of detail you use, your ability to keep characters in character, and your portrayal of Finn and FP's relationship just amazes me. Hell, I even reread the story several times because of how much I absolutely loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter, it promises to be even more righteous than the last! :D
1/3/2013 c2 7BreadGirl0797
I've said it once ill say it a thousand times: bubblegum had her chance with fin and she didn't take it. Now she's all pissed cause he moved on... Jeeze who'd thought a cartoon would give you so many feels? Haha great job! Can't wait for more!
7BreadGirl0797I've said it once ill say it a thousand times: bubblegum had her chance with fin and she didn't take it. Now she's all pissed cause he moved on... Jeeze who'd thought a cartoon would give you so many feels? Haha great job! Can't wait for more!
12/20/2012 c1 Guest
good continue
good continue
11/9/2012 c1 KinaSakria
Oh God...
This first chapter made me squee and want to cry all at the same time. D :
Very good! I can't wait for more chapters of this story!
Oh God...
This first chapter made me squee and want to cry all at the same time. D :
Very good! I can't wait for more chapters of this story!
11/7/2012 c1 12Yukio Sunshaine
This is the first Adventure Time fic I've ever read, so be honored. :)
For a first fic, I have to say this is cute and sad at the same time.
You portrayed Finn and Flame Princess' relationship very well.
They're in character too. So great job on that.
True loves surpasses all pain. It's clearly shown here.
So yeah, congratulations for a fic well done.
I'm very looking forward for next chapters.
12Yukio SunshaineThis is the first Adventure Time fic I've ever read, so be honored. :)
For a first fic, I have to say this is cute and sad at the same time.
You portrayed Finn and Flame Princess' relationship very well.
They're in character too. So great job on that.
True loves surpasses all pain. It's clearly shown here.
So yeah, congratulations for a fic well done.
I'm very looking forward for next chapters.
11/6/2012 c1 900SparkAchu00
Hey that was...! I don't even know what to say... Hurry up with the next chapter! :)
900SparkAchu00Hey that was...! I don't even know what to say... Hurry up with the next chapter! :)
11/6/2012 c1 gufujgfjfvythcfjm
Well that was an amazing, detailed FinnxFP fic. I can't wait for your next story.
Well that was an amazing, detailed FinnxFP fic. I can't wait for your next story.