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12/3/2012 c1 93oldmoviewatcher
That was a tad bit comical. I was expecting Ziva to save him in some teasing, awkward (for Sterling) way. Then again, stories tend to write themselves.
11/9/2012 c1 30Agent Striker
Not exactly how i picture mcgee's train of thought...but this was good!
11/9/2012 c1 6To make you think
I loved the story. I will admit I have read a few fics that have a better McGee POV, but I think you did a good job. I think if you write a few more fics from his POV you will get even better. My favorite part is Tony's "get me out of this right now expression." Hilarious.
Keep writing.
11/8/2012 c1 Guest
I'm a little confused...
11/7/2012 c1 135Phosphorescent
This is cute while remaining subtle. My favorite line: "It would be a normal day in the life of Anthony DiNozzo Jr., if it weren't for his get me out of this right now expression."
11/7/2012 c1 Ctia
Gosto muito das tuas fanfictions! Continua a escrever... :D
11/6/2012 c1 Guest
Love it!
11/6/2012 c1 daxam1216
the whole situation is at this point weird, other than that your good(better than me and english is my first and only language). Nice story, I enjoy all the small things about for sharing.

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