for Strength of seven1/23/2013 c12 
4MiracleAngel500
Aww! Rue is just TOO CUTE! I can't stop smiling whenever there's a Rue chapter!
And Catoniss is officially my favorite pairing!
4MiracleAngel500Aww! Rue is just TOO CUTE! I can't stop smiling whenever there's a Rue chapter!
And Catoniss is officially my favorite pairing!
1/23/2013 c1 1Radio Free Death
Its a nice idea, but there are a lot of errors in this. One, you need to break into a new paragraph once someone starts talking. Two, the characters are very OOC, and I'm not sure if its the fast pace that makes this worse. Its a relief that the trained kids aren't portrayed as pure evil, but the way they all just meet together with no problems is unrealistic. And Katniss just blatantly announcing that she never loved Peeta is just too quick. Peeta's thoughts on this are never brought up, which would be nice because I can imagine how angered and shocked he is to find out that Katniss had been playing him all this time and she refuses to be pulled into a forced relationship. He does turn into a bigtime asshole really quick in the end, which is a bit realistic, but it tries too hard to make him seem like an asshole.
Slow down the pace, develop these characters, and have conflicts that they have to overcome, mainly with each other.
1Radio Free DeathIts a nice idea, but there are a lot of errors in this. One, you need to break into a new paragraph once someone starts talking. Two, the characters are very OOC, and I'm not sure if its the fast pace that makes this worse. Its a relief that the trained kids aren't portrayed as pure evil, but the way they all just meet together with no problems is unrealistic. And Katniss just blatantly announcing that she never loved Peeta is just too quick. Peeta's thoughts on this are never brought up, which would be nice because I can imagine how angered and shocked he is to find out that Katniss had been playing him all this time and she refuses to be pulled into a forced relationship. He does turn into a bigtime asshole really quick in the end, which is a bit realistic, but it tries too hard to make him seem like an asshole.
Slow down the pace, develop these characters, and have conflicts that they have to overcome, mainly with each other.
1/23/2013 c12 15SpideyPool504
OMG THAT WAS ADORABLE! AND I LOVE THE FUTURES FOR THEM! IT FITS THEM PERFECTLY! I LOVED THE THREE CHAPTERS! THEY WERE UTTERLY AWESOMELY AMAZING IN EVERY SHAPE AND FORM! I LOVED IT AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN PLEASE! But please take your time...wouldn't want to rush you... :) LOVED IT!
15SpideyPool504OMG THAT WAS ADORABLE! AND I LOVE THE FUTURES FOR THEM! IT FITS THEM PERFECTLY! I LOVED THE THREE CHAPTERS! THEY WERE UTTERLY AWESOMELY AMAZING IN EVERY SHAPE AND FORM! I LOVED IT AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN PLEASE! But please take your time...wouldn't want to rush you... :) LOVED IT!
11/25/2012 c8 1WithMyDarkSide
This is amazing I LOVE the story line Cato and katniss are Soo cute together :D and wow peeta is a d-bag but I love watching Cato save the day :D
1WithMyDarkSideThis is amazing I LOVE the story line Cato and katniss are Soo cute together :D and wow peeta is a d-bag but I love watching Cato save the day :D
11/17/2012 c7 Guest
OMG I WANTED ANOTHER CHAPTER...AND I GOT IT truley a christmas... i mean almost thanksgiving MIRICALE!you are a VERY talented writer. when i was finished reading the 7th chapter i was rotflol...and if u dont no wat that means (beacuse i didnt untill now..) it means Rolling On The Floor Laughing Out Loud
OMG I WANTED ANOTHER CHAPTER...AND I GOT IT truley a christmas... i mean almost thanksgiving MIRICALE!you are a VERY talented writer. when i was finished reading the 7th chapter i was rotflol...and if u dont no wat that means (beacuse i didnt untill now..) it means Rolling On The Floor Laughing Out Loud