for If You Love Me10/14/2013 c1 Guest
...it's...ok...I guess...yeah.
...it's...ok...I guess...yeah.
11/16/2012 c1 
20Galu and Lalu Lover
Aw! That was sooo cute and sweet and adorable! It's amazing! LOVE IT!
20Galu and Lalu LoverAw! That was sooo cute and sweet and adorable! It's amazing! LOVE IT!
11/12/2012 c1 SkeletoNQueeN06
oh god! that was impossibly cute! i love it! seriously love it.. thank you for the heartwarming story.. :)
oh god! that was impossibly cute! i love it! seriously love it.. thank you for the heartwarming story.. :)
11/10/2012 c1 MrGoodyTwoShoes
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MGTS of Critics United
Actions not allowed:
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2. Rewriting names of characters/locations of one story in order to upload to multiple categories.
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.
This chapter is not allowed under section 3.
Songfics and the of song lyrics you do not own are not allowed here because they contain copyrighted lyrics that you do not have the permission to reproduce.
You should try to at least write rework your story (disclaimers don't cut it) so that it references the song (like it's playing on the radio in the background) instead of posting the lyrics to it. If you don't change then your story could be removed/deleted by the admins here.
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11/9/2012 c1 5WarriorQueen124
No, it was great! 3 I'm supposed to be doing homework, but I read the summary and I JUST HAD TO READ IT!
Great job! :) I really loved it and thought it was adorable. Their relationship here is so perfecttttt. :D
Keep writing!
5WarriorQueen124No, it was great! 3 I'm supposed to be doing homework, but I read the summary and I JUST HAD TO READ IT!
Great job! :) I really loved it and thought it was adorable. Their relationship here is so perfecttttt. :D
Keep writing!
11/9/2012 c1 mdtiger
I like this cliche. It was cute and it was enjoyable when all the other readings have been more towards tragedy and heartbreaking. This was a break.
I like this cliche. It was cute and it was enjoyable when all the other readings have been more towards tragedy and heartbreaking. This was a break.