
11/30/2012 c1
1icemaster29
it is funny but i dont think its a crack though.
you made many spelling mistakes but i am not going to say it is bad. it was an exceptional story.

it is funny but i dont think its a crack though.
you made many spelling mistakes but i am not going to say it is bad. it was an exceptional story.
11/15/2012 c1
9ByakuyasMistress
This is fantastic! I was absolutely as speechless as ByaBya! My only critique would be I wish it wasn't a one banger! Hahaha! I cannot wait for more of your work! _

This is fantastic! I was absolutely as speechless as ByaBya! My only critique would be I wish it wasn't a one banger! Hahaha! I cannot wait for more of your work! _
11/13/2012 c1
2animeangel1996
XD very clever! Even the slight OOCness still stuck to their basic characters! I thought it was really funny! (:

XD very clever! Even the slight OOCness still stuck to their basic characters! I thought it was really funny! (:
11/9/2012 c1 Guest
ROFL! write a chapter 2 please?
ROFL! write a chapter 2 please?