for Paul Says Wha?3/20/2022 c2 Guest
*snicker* Hippo-whaty-thingy.
*snicker* Hippo-whaty-thingy.
3/20/2022 c1 Guest
I don’t think Percy would go fishing cuz he’s related to fish right?with the whole Poseidon thing I think he’d be sea animal rights activist of all sea animal rights activists.
I don’t think Percy would go fishing cuz he’s related to fish right?with the whole Poseidon thing I think he’d be sea animal rights activist of all sea animal rights activists.
3/20/2021 c3 Vaidehi
Loved it!
Loved it!
12/20/2020 c3 starsandstripesforever29
The best sentence in this whole fanfiction is “Hey, Percy! Bye, Percy!”
The best sentence in this whole fanfiction is “Hey, Percy! Bye, Percy!”
11/19/2020 c3 Guest
I LOVE THIS
I LOVE THIS
8/9/2020 c1 
2riptidethepen
I love that Nico was in there, and I love that Paul thought Percy was insane at first.
2riptidethepenI love that Nico was in there, and I love that Paul thought Percy was insane at first.
3/19/2019 c2 123ninjadevil
Man I loved this story! It was absolutely awesome! Great great great story!
123ninjadevilMan I loved this story! It was absolutely awesome! Great great great story!
3/11/2019 c3 ninjadevil
Awesome story! Abolsutely amazing! I loved it so much! Percy showing off his powers makes me happy! I LOVED IT SO MUCH!
Awesome story! Abolsutely amazing! I loved it so much! Percy showing off his powers makes me happy! I LOVED IT SO MUCH!
12/18/2015 c1 HypFish
Hey man! I really love your ideas and i like your story a lot as well. My only constructive critism is:
You keep switching from present to past. Try to keep it in one time sense, otherwise it can be confusing. Example, "Percy looked surprised, and Paul doesnt..." looked is past, doesnt is present. Try either looked and didn't, if you're aiming for past.
Also, this story is very fast paced. While this is not always a bad thing, if you move too quickly the story nor the characters develop as deeply. I certainly would have loved to see a more emotional side of Paul when he learned the truth, and saw it with his own eyes.
Keep up the good work! 3
Hey man! I really love your ideas and i like your story a lot as well. My only constructive critism is:
You keep switching from present to past. Try to keep it in one time sense, otherwise it can be confusing. Example, "Percy looked surprised, and Paul doesnt..." looked is past, doesnt is present. Try either looked and didn't, if you're aiming for past.
Also, this story is very fast paced. While this is not always a bad thing, if you move too quickly the story nor the characters develop as deeply. I certainly would have loved to see a more emotional side of Paul when he learned the truth, and saw it with his own eyes.
Keep up the good work! 3
6/6/2015 c3 Lara
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I've gone purple!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I've gone purple!
6/6/2015 c1 Lara
Love it! 'Can't touch this!'
Love it! 'Can't touch this!'
3/12/2015 c3 Mango
Happy fun time!
Happy fun time!
1/18/2015 c3 Guest
THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME!'
THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME!'