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11/30/2012 c3 Raytu17
I like the premise. I'm curious about where it's headed. We see Rose and Emmetts perspective but I'm curious about Holly's. The chapters are pretty short and could be fleshed out more. For instance we could see more of Holly's transition into the home and into the coven. How does Renesme react with another little girl around? Is there Jealousy or big sister protect instincts? We could see more of an interaction between her and the rest of the family and possibly even the wolves. How are Rose and Emmett going to handle when she trips and falls and bleeds? It's just the beginning so you probably had this stuff in mind but I thought I would mention it just in case.
11/13/2012 c3 Deh
A fic é ótima, mas acho que os capítulos são um pouco curtos
11/12/2012 c3 6Fangirl44
Awwww, it's going to be interesting as she gets older
Update soon
11/11/2012 c1 Fangirl44
Going to be interesting.
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