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very sweet
very sweet
12/22/2012 c1 
15Narnia2098
I abosoluely loved it. I like the whole story, but especially the last part, because I love the way they take care of each other. Good work!
God Bless,
Ashleigh
15Narnia2098I abosoluely loved it. I like the whole story, but especially the last part, because I love the way they take care of each other. Good work!
God Bless,
Ashleigh
11/11/2012 c1 3Gaia was Framed
Great concept! Love the ending scene with Edmund especially. I'm reminded of a poem by Emily Dickinson:
“Hope” is the thing with feathers -
That perches in the soul -
And sings the tune without the words -
And never stops - at all -
And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -
And sore must be the storm -
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm -
I’ve heard it in the chillest land -
And on the strangest Sea -
Yet - never - in Extremity,
It asked a crumb - of me."
Thanks for sharing!
GwF
3Gaia was FramedGreat concept! Love the ending scene with Edmund especially. I'm reminded of a poem by Emily Dickinson:
“Hope” is the thing with feathers -
That perches in the soul -
And sings the tune without the words -
And never stops - at all -
And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -
And sore must be the storm -
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm -
I’ve heard it in the chillest land -
And on the strangest Sea -
Yet - never - in Extremity,
It asked a crumb - of me."
Thanks for sharing!
GwF
11/11/2012 c1 2MCH
Lovely I hope there will be more about where people find hope. priceless about Oreius question to Lucy " Now, why don't we return to Cair Paravel and tell your guards how you managed to escape?" I see more training for her guard. Mind you if I was Oreius I'd be looking at what Lucy did and work with her and her guard a plan of defence when she is under attack
Last bit was Edmund and Lucy and how he dealt with nightmares.
2MCHLovely I hope there will be more about where people find hope. priceless about Oreius question to Lucy " Now, why don't we return to Cair Paravel and tell your guards how you managed to escape?" I see more training for her guard. Mind you if I was Oreius I'd be looking at what Lucy did and work with her and her guard a plan of defence when she is under attack
Last bit was Edmund and Lucy and how he dealt with nightmares.
11/10/2012 c1 236LadyAlambiel
Oh this is sweet. And Sherket gets her first cameo in another author's work! Lol, love the scene between Oreius and Lucy. Yes, how did the six-year-old escape her guards? Aww, Edmund and Lucy fluff. Sooo cute.
As always, keep writing!
Lady A
236LadyAlambielOh this is sweet. And Sherket gets her first cameo in another author's work! Lol, love the scene between Oreius and Lucy. Yes, how did the six-year-old escape her guards? Aww, Edmund and Lucy fluff. Sooo cute.
As always, keep writing!
Lady A