for The King and His Queen2/2/2013 c1 
66Frodo's sister
Good accounts of Caspian and Lilandil. I noticed there aren't a lot of stories written about Caspian and Lilandil. There are probably a lot more Caspian and Susan stories, and Caspian and Lucy stories than there are Caspian and Lilandil stories. I can see Caspian with Susan, but I can't see him with Lucy. She is too young for him.
66Frodo's sisterGood accounts of Caspian and Lilandil. I noticed there aren't a lot of stories written about Caspian and Lilandil. There are probably a lot more Caspian and Susan stories, and Caspian and Lucy stories than there are Caspian and Lilandil stories. I can see Caspian with Susan, but I can't see him with Lucy. She is too young for him.
11/28/2012 c1 8Heliopause
Very cheerful and fun to read! :) I liked the mix of sources - the journal, the letters, and the newspaper announcement.
8HeliopauseVery cheerful and fun to read! :) I liked the mix of sources - the journal, the letters, and the newspaper announcement.
11/11/2012 c1 2MCH
Like the way you are telling this story not using royals but the ordinary people as they put their lifes around caspian and Lilliandil story. I smiled quite a bit particularly particularly with Tarven.
2MCHLike the way you are telling this story not using royals but the ordinary people as they put their lifes around caspian and Lilliandil story. I smiled quite a bit particularly particularly with Tarven.
11/10/2012 c1 72WillowDryad
I liked this. We don't see too much with RD (unless she's the evil temptress parting poor Caspian from his beloved Susan, sheesh). Nicely done.
72WillowDryadI liked this. We don't see too much with RD (unless she's the evil temptress parting poor Caspian from his beloved Susan, sheesh). Nicely done.
11/10/2012 c1 236LadyAlambiel
Very funny. Love the sailor's griping. The correspondence between the sisters was fun too...it wasn't Fauns, it was a Bear lol. As always, keep writing!
Lady A
236LadyAlambielVery funny. Love the sailor's griping. The correspondence between the sisters was fun too...it wasn't Fauns, it was a Bear lol. As always, keep writing!
Lady A