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12/16/2012 c1 2LillyWhiteRosePetals
Great start...looking forward to see where the stories go. I haven't played this game in a long time. I wont remember the names of non-important spaces or things. Your footnotes will help.
11/13/2012 c1 98Dan Sickles
This looks like it's going to be a great new story! I love how you are always turning the reader on to great new things. I've never heard any Velvet Undergroudn except for "Sweet Jane" and this song looks really interesting!

I agree that the summary could be a little shorter - just start out telling about Celeste and Clarice and it should be fine!
11/12/2012 c1 4jetflight
Humm... You know what, I think I'm gonna run an experiment and read this. And try and see how much sense the whole thing makes for me (you probably shouldn't expect such long exchanges of essays as with "Wastelander", I'm afraid).

So far, so good. Let's see what happens, what continues to happen and... hey, maybe I can unleash the monocle on you some day again, eh?
11/11/2012 c1 549yellow 14
A strange, odd piece that grabs and doesn't let go. Nice work, keep updating
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