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2/10/2019 c1 catspats31
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1/21/2015 c1 IarIz
He reached over and closed the rip in her dress and brought her close to him. "Get a room with me?"
Rukia got up on her tippy toes to kiss him. "Come home with me," she countered.

What a nice read... Thanks for this.
5/28/2013 c1 Fenris Jin
Yeah, they're both wasted on being elementary school teachers.. It would be good for them to get sacked anyway.. XD
2/11/2013 c1 1Bmast
ok that was awesome
2/2/2013 c1 Awesome
Whoa, I totally love this story. It is very hard to find well written M stories. But you have one of the best I've read so far. The plot made sense and man was the M scenes hot. LOL poor Ishida. But I really enjoyed this. Nicely written M story and not to mention spot on AU story.
1/21/2013 c1 Your Friend Iris
You need to do next chapter of this story. C:
1/23/2013 c1 liizziieoh
Oh wow. This was both hot and funny! *fans herself*
I loved every minute of it. You did a great job and I can't wait to read more of your work!
12/8/2012 c1 noname00
Though I loved the ending I cant help but to want more; the fic was great
11/14/2012 c1 1Erenismine
Omg so cute :O I like the part , when you write the lemon :O It's so cute
Continue like this :)
11/14/2012 c1 allrisebb
Woah! The story is so cute...hot and so good :))

Thank u!
11/13/2012 c1 winter blaze
Why arent they worried about someone seeing them, i mean its a glass elevator! Why did u put Rukia as a teacher?
11/13/2012 c1 amy.cute
I like it!
11/13/2012 c1 3Tomyallen
*Jaw hanging*
Wow...that was one hot chapter. You should continue this story. I think it would be cool to see how they manage the situation with their jobs and still maintain a relationship.

Anywhoo...Great job! Well written and very few errors for writing.
11/12/2012 c1 5xxconfusedchanxx
Loved it.
It was humorous and hot XD
11/12/2012 c1 2EmpressMinea
I can't stop laughing on those lines:

The jury is still out...more evidence is necessary

Get a room with me...come home with me

This is one of the funniest ichiruki lemon i've read so far.
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