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3/24/2013 c1 Autobotgirl2234
Apparently Optimus isn't sick yet.
3/22/2013 c3 PrimesSPARROW
loved it keep this up its awesome work
3/22/2013 c3 1Kae88
Nicely done Bee! The plot does thicken, can't wait to see what happens! :D
3/22/2013 c3 20Cairistona
Hooray for an update! X)

Sneaking chocolate on the sly, eh? My kind of girl. I eat granola bars between classes, and I always get the chocolate chip ones, so I am literally eating chocolate every day!

I love how you set up the fuel situation and details... like, the Energon shortage and the complicated bit about the gasoline and diesel. Nicely done there! Nicely thought out.

Oh, I'm sure she's not worrying for nothing... ;) Nor is Ratchet.

Happy writing on the next chapter! :)
3/22/2013 c3 Galem
Excellent chapter! I'm eager for the next one. XD
3/22/2013 c3 darkpoisonivy
Update soon!
3/22/2013 c3 43AutobotGuy710
Ooooh I'm so excited to see what happens next chapter! Great job with this one. :)
3/21/2013 c1 TimeStopperGirl
You are awesome! Enough said. :)
3/19/2013 c2 AutobotGuy710
Oh I do like this a lot so far. I hope you update soon because you have the makings of a very interesting and fun story here.
2/9/2013 c2 Galem
This so sweet! I admit I dumped the Bots awhile back because they were amazingly getting boring. But you have restored them to me. Thank you and keep it up. You have reminded me why I loved them in the first place. :D
2/8/2013 c1 2Smandaangel
Yaaaay u found your muse, she was obviously hiding out with mine! Anyway lovely chappie, love the descriptions particularly of my two favourite guys... Who wouldn't smile when faced with those baby blues of Bee's and you bet your aft there's a spark of gold in 'Hide! Anyway can't wait for ur next update xxx
2/8/2013 c2 20Cairistona
I absolutely LOVED the way you described each of the bots from Ami's point of view! It was beautifully done and ever so delightful to read. I think "His huge blue optics gave him an absolutely adorable look that would make her smile when she saw him" about Bee my favorite physical description. And the part about Prime, him seeming to have something hidden, was wonderful.
2/7/2013 c2 PrimesSPARROW
very good filler
2/7/2013 c2 1Kae88
I love her perceptions Bee, that was lovely.
1/5/2013 c1 3Rosscow
I'm glad to find such an interesting story. I hope your muse for Life's a Gas returns soon. We will all patiently wait for your update.
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