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6/13/2020 c39 Takadoshi Uzumaki
Meh, democracy worked best when Calvin Coolidge was the president. (He believed in a lack of major government interference.)
6/13/2020 c16 The Tetract
Old story. Still gonna point this out, though.

This plot with the clones “becoming their own people” makes no sense from the get go.

Unless the clones somehow come into existence with none of the emotions/memories of naruto, then it is a fact that all of his clones should have an extreme level of affection for hanabi, and a great level of affection for yume and possibly akitsu. So, for them to start fucking each other and enter a relationship (which is already pretty odda few weeks out of his body and suddenly naruto clones are willing to fuck themselves?) they’d have to be willing to ignore their feelings for hanabi, as well as the ones for yume and hanabi.

Which is entirely, completely, ridiculously out of character for the naruto you’ve built up.

Cool story otherwise.
6/8/2020 c3 Guest
Yashima was quivered in sheer terror, backing away slowly, trying to make herself seem as small as possible in an attempt to escape the notice of the 'power' before her. She didn't even consider going to the aid of her Ashikabi. The overpowering presence before her overwhelmed the bond between her and Junichi.

Lol no. Sekirei are beings solely and completely dedicated to love for the ashikabi. Nothing short of death would stop them.

Unless they're karasuba.
5/26/2020 c43 MonkeyDGabry
Naruto's chakra is orange in the manga if i am remembering right. It's just in the anime that is blue.
5/25/2020 c28 MonkeyDGabry
Damn, i read this story a long time ago, and reading it again after so many years made me realize that there are a lot of plot holes, i can almost find one every chapter ahah. Oh well the story is still fun. Oh an since the manga was still on going i find it funny that you thought your Naruto is more op than in the show. You underestimated Kishimoto and his stupid ability to break power scales ahah. The Naruto at the end of the manga could one shot every one in his base form most likely. It's ridiculous.
5/22/2020 c51 i.amdizzy2
Ight , I highly slept on this story when I was younger . You’re one of the more skilled writers that I’ve come across.
5/6/2020 c2 SLay KinG
classic clishé Sasuke will be back if nt him then his abilities shouldn't Naruto feel emotions
5/2/2020 c2 SLay KinG
classic clishé Sasuke will be back if nt him then his abilities shouldn't Naruto feel emotions
4/20/2020 c2 Jamal rarick
Nope. Can’t do it anymore. Way too trusting, left Sauske in the alley without destroying the body, giving away information, and the worst so far giving away blood to strangers in a foreign place he doesn’t understand. Stupid bro stupid.
3/19/2020 c2 4Issexwithyourcloneincest
Wow, after dealing with orochimaru, curse mark people, a mecha Naruto, mad scientists and knowing the risks of it all, he still willingly gave his blood to people he doesn't know or trust despite knowing that they were going to use it for testing? That's one point down for this story. The only redeeming thing I've seen in this is that his fiance isn't hinata or sakura. I'd have left, no matter how interesting this story seemed
3/10/2020 c1 3AadenHelan
oh my god. this story is so stupid i can't even find it funny, a motherfcking Kyuubi Sage Mode is weaker than Miya? I don't know what you smoked or hit your head so hard or shet when writting this Story.

Why not put Miya in Narutoverse and have her battle Kaguya when you're at it?

i know you want to make a plot for the story and not make an OP MC, but can you do it and not make yourself look stupid? if you want take a weaker Naruto than just take him on the early Shippuden instead of the great war or just make him destroy his Chakra Coil or something.

To be honest this Naruto doesn't even deserved to live and must got killed by Pein because he doesn't deserve to fight against Madara and Kaguya
2/21/2020 c51 1Zabon95
That was a truly amazing story, thank you for writing and publishing it! :D
2/19/2020 c12 fautodd23
por favor has un favor al mundo arancate las manos i deja de pensar en fanfics no eres digno de ellos mira que dejar a una niña pequeña con un gilipollas tan grande retirate en una cueba donde nadie ne el resto de tu vida te encuentre
2/3/2020 c26 Issei ODR
Juubi
2/1/2020 c2 Issei ODR
Creo que lo más similar que hay de sistema de circulación del chakra sería como corre la sangre por los vasos sanguíneos.
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