
10/4/2018 c10
3melovecats
one thing i can't stop thinking while reading this: THAT LAVI PICTURE IS SOOOO CUTE! you have no idea how much i freaked when i saw that.

one thing i can't stop thinking while reading this: THAT LAVI PICTURE IS SOOOO CUTE! you have no idea how much i freaked when i saw that.
11/27/2016 c6 guest
where is deryn? im so excited to find out!
where is deryn? im so excited to find out!
8/31/2015 c10 Random Guy
I really love this series. Keep writing!
I really love this series. Keep writing!
10/29/2013 c10 the burnt Huxley
Yes! Lilit!
Please do a Deryn Lilit scene at the end because it is my favourite leviathan shipping. anyway i love what you've done with it
Yes! Lilit!
Please do a Deryn Lilit scene at the end because it is my favourite leviathan shipping. anyway i love what you've done with it
9/21/2013 c5 Guest
on a scale of 1 to knife in my gut i'd say 9 on the chance your a guy, but alek thought the same so...
on a scale of 1 to knife in my gut i'd say 9 on the chance your a guy, but alek thought the same so...
9/21/2013 c3 Vieltrien
i wish escalators went up this fast (well escalated quickly)
i wish escalators went up this fast (well escalated quickly)
7/15/2013 c10 Erica
This is awesome! You REALLY should update!
This is awesome! You REALLY should update!
6/14/2013 c1 Veronica
I totally need to know what's going to happen next!
I totally need to know what's going to happen next!
6/14/2013 c10
8Don't gve a crappppp
Meh. The idea is ok, but you got to the point too quickly. You don't just fall in love with someone in 3 chapters. Don't get me wrong, it's quite creative how you incorporated all the characters, but it could use some improvement

Meh. The idea is ok, but you got to the point too quickly. You don't just fall in love with someone in 3 chapters. Don't get me wrong, it's quite creative how you incorporated all the characters, but it could use some improvement
5/20/2013 c9 Guest
O.k. I just typed a review but I sounded really rude so I apologise.
What I meant to say was:
Great story! Utterly suberb. Usually I hate 'modern' versions of stories but this one was so barking brilliant. :)
Only one problem; Where's the ending? I need some ending! I am suffering from endingless-ness. Because of your utterly brilliant, suberb story, I am going to be spending the rest of my night crying sad dark tears of endingless-ness.
Please post an update soon.
O.k. I just typed a review but I sounded really rude so I apologise.
What I meant to say was:
Great story! Utterly suberb. Usually I hate 'modern' versions of stories but this one was so barking brilliant. :)
Only one problem; Where's the ending? I need some ending! I am suffering from endingless-ness. Because of your utterly brilliant, suberb story, I am going to be spending the rest of my night crying sad dark tears of endingless-ness.
Please post an update soon.
5/20/2013 c10 Guest
Great story. Where's the rest?
Great story. Where's the rest?
4/27/2013 c10 FrostSherlock
AMazing but too short! i just now got around to reading it... sorry 'bout dat
AMazing but too short! i just now got around to reading it... sorry 'bout dat
4/8/2013 c10
5queenoftheworld99
I LOVE this story! I just read the entire thing in like ten minutes. IT IS AMAZING. Is it bad that I really REALLY like Alek's evil, possibly psychopathic cousin? But then again, this is coming from an evil, possibly psychopathic person. So ya! Write faster!

I LOVE this story! I just read the entire thing in like ten minutes. IT IS AMAZING. Is it bad that I really REALLY like Alek's evil, possibly psychopathic cousin? But then again, this is coming from an evil, possibly psychopathic person. So ya! Write faster!