for Haruhi's Impossible Perfect Ending!10/2/2014 c1 Amma
I love how you wrote it from Hunny's P.O.V., An I love how you explored each and every character, but could you make it less cynical? Also, I appreciated the reference to the episodes themselves, as Hunny says, "...after having dived off a bridge to save Haruhi..." By far, I liked the conversation with Kaoru the most, although I see why they could never be together. I hate to be negative, but I really don't like the "...too scared to lose.." Kyoya that you depicted in paragraph five. Give him more of a chance please!*
*Please, I really love TakashiHaruhi/KyoyaHaruhi, so could you make a situation that at leats hint at either of these?
I love how you wrote it from Hunny's P.O.V., An I love how you explored each and every character, but could you make it less cynical? Also, I appreciated the reference to the episodes themselves, as Hunny says, "...after having dived off a bridge to save Haruhi..." By far, I liked the conversation with Kaoru the most, although I see why they could never be together. I hate to be negative, but I really don't like the "...too scared to lose.." Kyoya that you depicted in paragraph five. Give him more of a chance please!*
*Please, I really love TakashiHaruhi/KyoyaHaruhi, so could you make a situation that at leats hint at either of these?
5/10/2013 c1 
131claraowl
Awww! This was extremely sweet. I truly enjoyed Hunny's perception of the club.
I would love to read the sequel. Perhaps a KaoHaru story - Hikaru could realize (gasp! Is it possible?) that Kaoru is in love with Haruhi, and decided to act the big brother for once. It might be interesting. :)
131claraowlAwww! This was extremely sweet. I truly enjoyed Hunny's perception of the club.
I would love to read the sequel. Perhaps a KaoHaru story - Hikaru could realize (gasp! Is it possible?) that Kaoru is in love with Haruhi, and decided to act the big brother for once. It might be interesting. :)
3/5/2013 c1 87Poehlaris
Well, this was a rather interesting story. Might I suggest that you put in under Haruhi and Kaoru, but put in the summary that it is in Hunny's point of view? That might help your cause a little bit. Anyway, you had left a review on my story And If You Don't?, so I thought I'd check to see if you'd written anything for this lovely pairing. The story is bittersweet, it's true, but it's not a bad ending at all! It's not in the usual and that's what I enjoyed most about it. This was wonderful.
87PoehlarisWell, this was a rather interesting story. Might I suggest that you put in under Haruhi and Kaoru, but put in the summary that it is in Hunny's point of view? That might help your cause a little bit. Anyway, you had left a review on my story And If You Don't?, so I thought I'd check to see if you'd written anything for this lovely pairing. The story is bittersweet, it's true, but it's not a bad ending at all! It's not in the usual and that's what I enjoyed most about it. This was wonderful.
1/31/2013 c1 1KyubbiGirl29
I wish that honey n haruhi would get together but that's not possible so I think that Mori and haruhi should be together
1KyubbiGirl29I wish that honey n haruhi would get together but that's not possible so I think that Mori and haruhi should be together
11/17/2012 c1 5LoveLyss
This was really, really good! I definently think you should write a sequel! And hmm.. based on Hunny's observations I think that even though Kaoru and Haruhi would be perfect, Kyoya could swoop in and steal her away :)
5LoveLyssThis was really, really good! I definently think you should write a sequel! And hmm.. based on Hunny's observations I think that even though Kaoru and Haruhi would be perfect, Kyoya could swoop in and steal her away :)
11/17/2012 c1 2blackraven72
This is brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I don't know who Haruhi would end up with based on those observations...They're all so well done.
2blackraven72This is brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I don't know who Haruhi would end up with based on those observations...They're all so well done.