for The Beginning12/1/2012 c6 MoonOverManifest
i really like your story please update soon
i really like your story please update soon
12/1/2012 c6 
2Aishani108
OMG I love Jasper please be more jASPER please it's so good and please don't make her like anyone else but Jason u got the character perfect keep writing
2Aishani108OMG I love Jasper please be more jASPER please it's so good and please don't make her like anyone else but Jason u got the character perfect keep writing
11/21/2012 c2 DeziRayDaughterOfApollo
Oh gosh, now Liper is in this too? Yikes! This is great so far though, keep it up!
Oh gosh, now Liper is in this too? Yikes! This is great so far though, keep it up!
11/18/2012 c1 Guest 1234567890
I really like, please continue. I really want Piper to stay and Reyna to go with Chase. Please UPDATE!
I really like, please continue. I really want Piper to stay and Reyna to go with Chase. Please UPDATE!
11/18/2012 c1 1rachel3athena
I liked it. Maybe when piper has gone to the other camp(if she goes) then u can show how reyna and Jason feels about it
Update soon
rats
1rachel3athenaI liked it. Maybe when piper has gone to the other camp(if she goes) then u can show how reyna and Jason feels about it
Update soon
rats