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11/26/2012 c2 15Elleth of Hidden Lore
Interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please!
11/26/2012 c1 Elleth of Hidden Lore
Wow I like this new idea. Very interesting and original.

One little suggestion, when there is a conversation between two or more each one should be separate like so:

"Elf, there is talk of a circus passing through the city."

Legolas turned around and saw Gimli walking up to him. "That sounds nice," he replied.

"Arwen and Aragorn were planning on seeing it and they invited us to go with them," his dwarvish friend told him.

"That sounds pleasant, especially after the war," Legolas responded.

It is easier to read this way.
11/26/2012 c2 habjafcvevgbzo
Oh so now it's mystery. Keep it up! But you do have some spelling mistakes.
11/19/2012 c1 Guest
Yay like the Legolas and Gimli part at the end. Great story
11/19/2012 c1 4Jasperslittlesister
This is different but i like the idea behind it please update soon
11/18/2012 c1 5A Wandering Storyteller
This is interesting to read. I wonder what will happen next? Can't wait to read more!
Wandy

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