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12/23/2016 c27 3RHatch89
Awesome update :)
12/23/2016 c27 111ZabuzasGirl
Merry Christmas!
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
11/27/2016 c11 95TMI Fairy
I love beets!
Borys
11/27/2016 c10 TMI Fairy
Thumbs for showing that high born women also had a job to do.
Borys
11/27/2016 c9 TMI Fairy
IMO there are several babies born every year at the castle. Think of the size of the staff, a large part of which is female, and the promiscuity typical of Westeros.
So screams of newborns should be part of the background noise :) of the place.
Borys
11/27/2016 c8 TMI Fairy
I was scared shitless when I first saw my son (Robert, BTW). I touched him with my fingertip as he was so tiny!
He was 9lbs/4,150 but to me he was tiny ...
Borys
11/27/2016 c6 TMI Fairy
Yay for muff diving!
Borys
11/27/2016 c5 TMI Fairy
Don't girls use the word FAT?
Poor Sylvia - her parents dump all their shit on her ..
Borys
11/27/2016 c4 TMI Fairy
I found it odd that the teaching was only of Sylvia and Robb. Why not the younger kids too? Too large age difference?
The lord's wife was (or could be) the manager of the household. In Lady Catelyn's case that would be managing the feeding and whatnot of several hundred people.
Borys
11/27/2016 c3 TMI Fairy
Good job in painting what a dysfunctional family the poor sod came from ...
I loved the line about Arya not being any of the first but certainly being entertaining! Excellent writing!
If her point of refeence for boys is Jofrey, Robb will be a pleasant surprise ...
And she really does need to go out more ...
Borys
11/26/2016 c1 TMI Fairy
CAPITAL, not Capitol.
A capital is a CITY.
A capitol is a BUILDING.
An interesting read so far.
Borys
11/9/2016 c26 3wordsonpage
Welcome back! So glad to have an update on Sylvia & Robb. I love the way you've written Robb, he's trying so hard to be the strong , authoritive leader but always comes through with a bit of tough love. These two characters are so well written you just can't help but route for them when they're down, or just drunk! Amazing work , looking forward to next update :)
11/7/2016 c26 2Kaizer-Kid
Hmm, Robb's likely to put in the tough love soon, and to be harsh with her and force her out of the bottle and his bed, given how she behaved here. She reacted very humanly, yet this is simply the way Robert's line handles things initially I think, likely she's going to need a few chapters and a thoroughly enraged Robb/death of Ned to turn her upon the Lannisters, if Robert's death hasn't already done a good deal of that already. She's already going to assist Robb to an extent, but the moment Brynden comes along and Ned dies, she'll be right enraged I think. Just a quick question; are the Banners already there or have they just started to trickle in?
11/7/2016 c26 1metaladdict
Really good chapter.

I actually like the extreme reaction on Sylvia's part. Just let loose, no bullshit, just bliss. You see it a lot when people are in situations where they have to act a certain way.

Robb action this chapter is so a typical for a Stark. He should do one thing but fuck if isn't going to be a good guy :D.
11/6/2016 c26 3RHatch89
Awesome :)
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